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The Dark Side of Cinnamon

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The full version is available now for pre-order! See my website (jennifer-rowlands.com) and subscribe to my newsletter for future release surprises, cover reveals, coupon codes, and other information only subscribers will receive! With Max's mother gone, he and his family move into a new house surrounded by strange woods. Max makes new friends out of three small creatures, called Bonkerts, who introduce him to a magical world--one that quickly shows it's dark side. When one of the Bonkerts is turned evil, and Max's dad is swallowed by a mysterious pool, Max sets out to restore the friendly Bonkert he's come to know and save the father he loves.

Status
Excerpt
Chapters
4
Rating
5.0 3 reviews
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1: Strange Invaders

Morning finally casts light upon the two-story house in the middle of a field surrounded by woods. The terrifying noises—banging, slamming, strange voices—that filled the night have finally quieted and been replaced by the gentle songs of birds. Max tip-toes to the kitchen, careful not to trip over the many boxes. Every other room is how he remembers it from the night before. Bare walls, no pictures of his broken family. Moving boxes everywhere, each full of memories that no longer matter.

The house is now home to four beds: one covered in blue and red blankets for Max, a white and pink one fit for a princess for Rylee, one for Grams that she’d had for ages, and one more. The last was bought fourteen years ago. It was once the bed of Henry and Julie, Max’s and Rylee’s dad and mom. Dad sleeps there alone now. Mom won’t be joining them in this new house in a new town in the middle of nowhere.

At the end of the summer, Max and Rylee will be going to a new school. Rylee has no problem making friends. She is just like Mom: ginger hair, stunning green eyes, sweet, funny—at least to anyone who isn’t her brother. Everyone who knows Rylee loves her. Everyone in her new fourth-grade class is sure to love her, too. Max will be a sixth-grader in a new place with no friends. And his mom won’t be there to tell him he can handle it.

The carpet that once belonged to a happier family hugs Max’s feet as he walks. He wants to hate it, but it feels so soft and tickles as it rubs under his toes. Turning his wooden baseball bat in his hands, Max tries to focus. Although, he had wandered between these walls yesterday for the first time, he didn’t really see each room for what it was. Every window looks out on an empty yard that stretches toward the surrounding woods, reaching away from him, leaving him behind. The wallpaper is angry. The ceiling looks back at him with such a heavy sadness that Max feels it might topple down on him at any moment. Every door leads to another dead end. He hates it there already; and the first night wasn’t easy.

Max approaches the bottom of the staircase, which empties into the living room. No one is there. His feet are snug against the bottom step, his shoulder presses into the wall as he peers around the corner. The breakfast table is visible from where he stands. Behind the table, the side door leading outside lets in waves of golden sunlight. Max leans around the corner a little further. He can barely make out the edge of the counter and cabinets that line the far wall of the kitchen. Morning rays spill through the window above the sink and spill over the yellow tiles at an angle.

Directly above the kitchen is his bedroom. Silence fills the space now, but not during the darkest hours of the night. The noises that had bubbled up from the kitchen were too alarming to allow him to sleep, too terrifying to allow him to leave his bed. He could have woken Grams, or shaken Dad from his sleep. He could have checked on Rylee to see if she heard it too. Instead, Max remained beneath his covers until the safety of daylight was restored. Now, he sees no evidence that anyone has been here at all. Whatever had been there seems to have vanished without a trace. Then he spots something.

A brown mist. He steps closer, shaky hands wrapped so firmly around the handle of the bat that his knuckles turn white. His feet are only a step away from leaving the plush carpet and pressing against the hard tiles. As he gets closer, Max scans the little bit of the kitchen he can see. The tiny brown particles swirl in the air, ignited in red when they pass through the sunlight. Then he hears it: a rustling noise and a squeak. Someone is here.

Max turns around and presses his back against the wall along the staircase, completely out of view of the kitchen. He gasps when he finds his sister standing on the step next to him, her favorite doll tucked under her arm. “Rylee,” he whispers, his voice angry and accusing. “What are you doing?”

“What are you doing?” she says. “Were you the one making all that noise last night?”

“You heard it, too?” Rylee nods in response. “Did Dad?”

Rylee shakes her head. “I went in to sleep by him because I got scared. He didn’t even notice.”

“Maybe he was too tired from moving all our stuff.”

“I don’t know. I’m going to see if Grams is awake yet.”

“Wait—” Max tries to stop his sister, but she hops down the stairs and wanders through the living room and down the hall to Grams’ room. “She never listens,” Max mutters to himself.

The rustling returns. Max doesn’t dare speak aloud. Instead, he takes a long, slow, silent breath and mentally prepares himself for what he is about to do. In one, swift motion Max’s back leaves the wall and he faces the kitchen head-on, bat at the ready. His jaw drops at the sight.

He sees no one, but baking supplies are everywhere. Flour dusts the floor. Butter is splattered against the cabinets. A pile of brown goo—the source of which he doesn’t care to know—set upon the counter. The air is as warm as it was while Grams cooked dinner the previous night.

Max’s breathing slows and he begins to smell it. It is sweet. By the scent alone he feels his anxiety subside. Chocolate. But not in just any form. It is his favorite thing to eat. The one thing he could eat for all three meals and again for dessert. But there is movement in the sink of the island.

Once again, Max tightens his grip on the bat and moves in a large circle. From a safe distance, he leans up on his toes to peer into the sink. The sunlight bounces off the stainless steel and he feels momentarily blinded. When Max’s eyes adjust, he notices a bag of sugar. It lays upon its side on the counter. Most of the contents have fallen out and formed a pile in the sink. From under the pile, something stirs. Cautiously, Max steps closer and reaches for a spatula. He stirs the sugar gently in the sink. Then it happens.

A shriek rings out from beneath the sugar and something small jumps out of the sink and high into the air. As it falls back down, Max whacks it with the spatula and sends it into a nearby bag of flour, which topples over. Out of the overturned bag of flour, another creature rolls out. They both cough in the cloud of white.

“What are you!” Max screams at the two creatures. They looked human but are quite plump and stand only two inches tall. The two continue to cough, unable to respond, but Max is far too frightened to give them time to recover. “Last chance!” He drops the spatula and raises the bat to show he is serious. As he breathes, he feels the floating particles catch in his nose and throat.

“Okay, okay!” One of tiny men shouts. His voice is as bold and loud as any man’s, despite his small stature. “We mean no harm.”

“Then what are you doing in my house?”

“We came to welcome you,” the other says. “I am Gorlin. This is my brother Broht.” The two tiny men wear similar clothing. Brown shoes, beige pants with suspenders, button shirts and beige vests. Each wears a hat upon his head: one purple, one blue.

“But this is my house.” Max lowers the bat slightly. He can’t fight the intrigue that builds in his mind over these friendly—or seemingly friendly—creatures.

“Yes,” Broht says. “We saw you moving in. Wanted to make you feel at home.”

Max looks around the kitchen. From this angle he can see that the refrigerator door is open. Eggs are oozing down the sides of the cabinets and dripping to the floor. A carton of milk lies on its side. By now, the white liquid has mostly emptied and poured across the counter, around the sink, and along the other side. The brown dust still floats on the air, making his nose itch.

“What is this?” Max tries to waft the cloud away.

“Jody,” says Gorlin.

Max stops and stares at the miniature man. “What? This dust is a person? A— One of you?”

“No, no!” Broht waves at the boy with both hands. “Our other brother. Jody!”

Following Broht’s gaze to an open shelf, Max looks carefully. A jar of cinnamon is jostled by an unseen force and moves slightly to the side. The boy steps closer and squints his eyes to be sure he knows what he is seeing. Out from the top pops a mushroom cloud of cinnamon, followed by a fellow covered in the brown powder. “Cinnamon!” Jody says as he happily licks his fingers.

“I don’t know how he stands to eat it like that,” says Broht. “But he loves the stuff. Almost as much as honey!”

Ding!

“What was that?” Max readies the bat once again.

Gorlin and Broht look at each other and back at Max. In unison, the tiny men wave their hands in the air and say, “Surprise!”

Max stares back at them, his confusion evident. They gesture toward the oven. Max walks sideways, inching toward the warm appliance. Taking one last glance at the two on the island, he pulls the oven door open only a few inches and peeks inside. Max’s heart sinks and his mouth waters. The bat slides to the floor and a smile spreads across his face.

“You made me brownies!”

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