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Beneath The Burning Mask

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Summary

"They loved the girl who smiled. They feared the woman she became." For years, she wore a mask crafted by betrayal, lies, and broken promises. The people she trusted stole everything—her family, her future, and even her name. The night the mask burned, so did the last piece of the innocent girl she used to be. Now, she returns with a new identity, a brilliant mind, and secrets capable of destroying kingdoms built on deception. But revenge comes with a price, and the closer she gets to the truth, the more she realizes she isn't the only one hiding behind a mask. Some monsters are born. Others are created by betrayal.

Genre
Mystery
Author
Becky B
Status
3mo ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1


The Night the Mask Burned

There is something cruel about betrayal.

It doesn't announce itself.

It smiles.

It hugs you.

It tells you everything will be alright before quietly pushing you into the fire.

...

The city called it the Night of Ashes.

To me...

It was the night I died.

—or at least that's what the world believed.

---

The ballroom glittered beneath thousands of crystal lights.

Champagne glasses clinked.

Laughter echoed through the marble hall.

Diamonds sparkled around necks that had never known suffering.

Tonight was supposed to be a celebration.

My father had spent years preparing for this charity gala. Every politician, billionaire, scientist, and celebrity wanted an invitation.

Including the people who wanted him dead.

I should have noticed the warning signs.

The uneasy look on Father's face.

The way Mother's smile never reached her eyes.

The bodyguards whispering into hidden microphones.

Instead...

I was busy pretending to be happy.

"You look beautiful."

I turned.

Adrian.

His smile had once been my safest place.

Tonight...

Something felt different.

"You've barely smiled all evening," he said.

"I have a bad feeling."

He chuckled softly.

"You're overthinking."

Maybe I was.

Or maybe my instincts were trying to save me.

Because exactly three minutes later...

The lights went out.

Darkness swallowed the ballroom.

Someone screamed.

A gunshot shattered the silence.

Then another.

And another.

Chaos exploded.

People ran in every direction.

Glass rained from the ceiling.

Someone grabbed my arm.

"Run!"

Father.

For the first time in my life...

I saw fear in his eyes.

Not fear for himself.

Fear for me.

He shoved something into my trembling hands.

A silver pendant.

"No matter what happens..."

His voice broke.

"...never let them have this."

Before I could ask why—

A deafening explosion ripped through the ballroom.

Heat slammed into my back.

The force threw me across the floor.

My ears rang.

Smoke swallowed everything.

I couldn't breathe.

"Mom!"

No answer.

"Dad!"

Only screams.

The fire spread unnaturally fast, devouring curtains, tables, and people alike.

I crawled across broken glass, my hands bleeding.

Then...

I saw him.

Adrian.

Standing perfectly still.

Watching.

Not helping.

Not running.

Watching.

His eyes met mine.

And he smiled.

Not the smile I'd fallen in love with.

A different one.

Cold.

Victorious.

As if everything had gone exactly according to plan.

"No..."

My voice barely escaped.

He stepped over Father's body.

Over his body.

Like he meant nothing.

Then he whispered words I would hear every night for the next three years.

"It was never love."

The ceiling collapsed.

Fire surrounded me.

Pain consumed everything.

I closed my eyes...

...and welcomed death.

---

Three Years Later.

A white porcelain mask rested in my hands.

Beautiful.

Perfect.

Fragile.

Just like the girl I used to be.

I stared into its empty eyes.

"They still think you're dead," the old woman said behind me.

"They're wrong."

Silence.

"They've become powerful."

"I know."

"They'll kill you if they discover who you are."

I smiled.

A slow...

Dangerous smile.

"They'll have to recognize me first."

I struck a match.

The tiny flame danced between my fingers.

For a moment...

I hesitated.

Not because I was afraid.

Because this was goodbye.

Goodbye to the girl who cried.

Goodbye to the girl who begged for mercy.

Goodbye to the girl who believed love could never lie.

The flame touched the edge of the porcelain.

At first...

Nothing happened.

Then thin cracks spread across the mask.

Orange fire crawled over its surface.

The mask blackened.

Split apart.

Collapsed into glowing ash.

I watched until the last ember died.

"My name is no longer the one they buried."

The old woman looked at me.

"Who are you now?"

I lifted my eyes.

"They created a monster."

"And monsters..."

I whispered.

"...always come home."

Outside, thunder rolled across the night sky.

Somewhere in the city...

The people who murdered my family slept peacefully.

They had no idea...

The dead were coming back.

And this time—

She wasn't coming for justice.

She was coming for every last one of them.

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