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The Secret She Never Told

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Summary

Everyone had a version of the story. Mira was the kind-hearted sister. Kriti was the selfish one. At least, that’s what everyone believed. When 17-year-old Kriti suddenly appears at her sister Mira’s new life, nobody understands how she knows so much about a family she has never met. She is rude. She is fearless. She is unpredictable. Sometimes she is sweet. Sometimes she is cruel. And sometimes… she looks like she knows a secret nobody else does. But the biggest question is not what Kriti is hiding. It’s— what is she protecting? Because between two sisters, the truth is never as simple as right or wrong. Some secrets are kept out of love. Some secrets destroy everything.

Genre
Drama
Author
Nilanjana
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1 The Family She Never Belonged To

THE SECRET SHE NEVER TOLD


Opening Scene

Morning.

A modern apartment in the city.

MIRA (25) stands in front of the mirror, getting ready.

She checks her phone.

A message from ABHISHEK.

She smiles.

Today is important.

She is meeting Abhishek's family.

Mira takes a deep breath and looks toward another room.

MIRA :

(shouting)

Kriti!

I'm going to be late today!

No response.

MIRA :

I have an office meeting.

Don't wait for me.

Eat dinner on time.

And don't order junk food again!

A voice comes from another room.

KRITI :

Yeah, yeah.

MIRA :

I'll be back around eleven.

And please don't get into trouble.

KRITI :

Ok promises.

Mira rolls her eyes and leaves.

The door closes.

Silence.

The camera moves toward the living room.

A girl sits on the sofa.

Only her back is visible.

Phone in her hand.

Long hair.

She slowly lowers her phone.

A small smile appears.

Not sweet.

Not friendly.

Interesting.

Because every time Kriti smiles like that—

someone is about to get into trouble.

CUT TO:

Abhishek's House

A large, beautiful house.

Mira arrives with Abhishek.

ABHISHEK :

Relax.

They'll like you.

Mira smiles.

Inside the house, the family welcomes her.

PRIYA (Abhishek's mother) is warm and kind.

RAJIV (Abhishek's father) is calm and respectful.

Mira feels comfortable.

For the first time, she feels like she belongs somewhere.

DING DONG.

The doorbell rings.

Everyone looks confused.

Nobody is expecting anyone.

Abhishek opens the door.

KRITI (17) stands there.

Confident.

Calm.

Like she owns the place.

MIRA

Kriti?!

KRITI

Hi.

Did you really think I'd miss meeting my future brother-in-law?

Everyone freezes.

Kriti walks inside without waiting for permission.

She looks around.

The expensive furniture.

The family photos.

The large house.

Everything.

She studies it quietly.

Then she sits on the sofa.

Comfortably.

KRITI

So?

Are we just going to stand here and stare at each other?

Let's sit.

Everyone exchanges awkward looks.

Mira stares at her.

Their eyes meet.

A silent sister conversation.

Mira's eyes:

"What are you doing here?"

Kriti raises an eyebrow.

KRITI

What?

You want to talk to me alone?

Why are you looking at me like that?

Like you're about to kill me.

Everyone laughs awkwardly.

PRIYA

You're very pretty, Kriti.

What's your secret?

KRITI

Good genes.

PRIYA

That's it?

KRITI

What else should I say?

That I wake up at five in the morning and drink magical water?

Everyone laughs.

PRIYA

You know what?

I like her.

MIRA

Give it five minutes.

PRIYA

She's honest.

KRITI

That's exactly what people say before they regret liking me.

ABHISHEK

I'm curious.

How did you know we live here?

We've never met before.

Mira talks about you, but we never met.

So how did you know who I am?

The room becomes quiet.

KRITI

Google.

ABHISHEK

Google?

KRITI

I'm kidding.

Everyone laughs.

KRITI

Mira suddenly started spending extra time getting ready.

She started smiling at her phone.

And protecting it with her life.

After that, it wasn't hard.

ABHISHEK

You investigated me?

KRITI

Researched.

It sounds friendlier.

KRITI

Anyway...

The real question is—

when are we eating?

PRIYA

Eating?

KRITI

Yes.

I'm starving.

Mira left without feeding me.

MIRA

Excuse me?

KRITI

Neglect.

This is abuse.

Everyone laughs.

PRIYA

Come on, let's have breakfast.

KRITI

Finally.

Someone in this family understands me.

Everyone walks toward the dining table.

Kriti looks at Rajiv.

KRITI

Uncle, I know you.

Everyone stops.

RAJIV

You know me?

KRITI

Of course.

You're the man who owns three factories, plays golf every Sunday, and still attends every family function.

RAJIV

How do you know that?

KRITI

Research.

Remember?

Abhishek laughs.

Mira covers her face.

MIRA

Kriti...

KRITI

What?

If my sister is marrying into this family, I need background checks on everyone.

RAJIV

Should I be worried?

KRITI

Probably.

Everyone sits at the dining table.

The food is served.

Kriti looks at the plates.

She takes one bite.

Silence.

PRIYA

What happened?

KRITI

Who made this?

NEHA (Rohan's wife)

I did.

KRITI

No offence...

But is this food or an oil factory?

The table becomes silent.

MIRA

Kriti.

KRITI

What?

I'm just saying.

This much oil could feed a hundred people.

Everyone stares.

KRITI

Does nobody here work out?

She looks at Abhishek.

KRITI

Abhishek, you have a good body.

How do you eat this and still look like that?

ABHISHEK

Kriti.

KRITI

What?

I asked a question.

ROHAN (Abhishek's brother)

Kriti, you could have just said you didn't like it.

KRITI

I didn't say I hated it.

I said it could be healthier.

ABHISHEK

There's a difference between being honest and hurting someone.

The table becomes quiet.

Kriti slowly puts her spoon down.

KRITI

You know what?

This is exactly what everyone says about me.

"You're rude."

"You're disrespectful."

"You should change."

She looks around.

KRITI

But this is how I talk.

This is me.

What did you expect?

That I would suddenly become a sweet, polite girl because I entered a rich family's house?

Nobody answers.

KRITI

I say what I think.

Maybe it's a bad habit.

Maybe it's not.

But at least you will always know what I actually feel.

Silence.

Mira looks at her sister.

Because she knows.

Kriti isn't pretending to be difficult.

She really is.

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