What is your opinion?
INTERESTING
"Great story! You are truly talented! Would you be interested in reading my story Selena's Darkness? https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/210943"
Time Keepers
"I liked your idea, after a rigorous editing it will be even more perfect."
my review
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I like it!
"I like this story! I liked the characters, the plot, and the dialog, and would like to read more. Definitely recommend!"
Time Keepers
"Interesting read! I look forward to more books from this author."
Great Story
"I thought this was a fresh edgy story that grabs you quickly and doesn't let go. I am looking forward to more from this author. Keep writing i think it has the makings of a brilliant book! :-)"
nicely done
"I love it!"
Nice Start!
"I am not a big fan of sci-fi but I thought I would give it go! The prelude of your book really brought me in, and I wanted to read the next chapter. You only have a couple of chapters, so what I have read from, it's pretty good. And to improve your grammar, try Grammarly for Chrome, so you can check your work before you submit it. I have bad grammar too, so it really helps. But overall, an amazing start!"
Love the idea!
"I love the idea of the book- it's interesting and the prologue hooks you immediately. Some technical things to figure out, but overall, I think I'd like to know how it progresses and continues on. It definitely occupied my mind with questions, so it's engaging and interesting! <3 klara"
Time Keepers
"This is an interesting concept with nice descriptions that brought scenes to life. Though I do agree with another reviewer that some paragraphs need to be broken up since they can slow the reader down but this is good so far."
There's potential
"While I don't think you have the full product quite yet, I definitely think that with a bit of practice, you have the potential to be a great writer. Your writing style in itself flows quite nicely and there were some particularly nice descriptions to be found in here too, and the concept definitely shows promise; it's certainly a commendable idea. However, I got confused in a couple of places earlier in the story, and I would recommend giving the reader the details of Alex's background a bit at a time rather than all at once otherwise we might not remember everything. I'd break your paragraphs up a little where you can too. Finally, I think you could do more with Alecia's character, At the moment, she seems a bit too vapid and objectified - expand more on it! Give her humour! Make her unique! I hope this feedback is helpful for you! Thanks for the swap, and keep writing! :)"
