What is your opinion?
The Beastlings
"I love this story & yes! I want to see more of it. The world needs so much more good in it & I think reading this book could help. Especially if read by teens & young adults. Please tell me where to find more. Thank you"
Interesting story
"I loved your character portrayal, can't wait to see more of your work as you continue to write. Addition of mini creatures to a mythological world was a great thing to do. It's a really cute short story to read. Hoping for more chapters."
The Beastlings
"A very enjoyable short story. Intriguing idea and I'd like more about V and the Beastlings."
Amazing
"You have an amazing book, I love it! The plot is amazing, however, there seems to be a few grammar mistakes throughout the book. I also think you could give a bit more detail about the Beastlings. Overall, this is a great book and I hope you continue writing this!"
Wow. :)
"My only advice is to bookmark www.grammarcheck.net. It helps me. :)"
Left me wanting more
"I really like your character portrayal and can‘t wait to get to know them better as you continue the story. I wonder how the plot will develop. There needs to be some proof reading and editing of sentence structure, grammar and punctuation, but even so, this is a great start to your novel."
The Beastlings
"I love this book Its my favourite Claire Turner book I love the Beastlings ..I would love some of my own...Great story ..well written...I just love it "
Amazing story
"I loved the story. Their all interesting characters. It's a very nice story. It's an amazing story."
Lovely fantasy
"I really enjoyed your story. Your writing style is almost like poetry. It has a soft beautiful cadence. I do encourage you to continue. This is a great beginning."
Cute story
"Your writing style is very good. I felt like as if scenes were playing in front of me. The plot is good and has the potential to be turned into a series of amazing mythological books."
Heartwarming
"What a lovely story. I love the little beastlings and I think this could be the beginning of a great series of stories about V and how she helps and cures people and brings good to the world."
Beastlings
"This story is definitely a cute one to read. Diving into the world of mythological, mini creatures was a great idea to integrate into your story. Overall, the plot was slightly weak and there were a couple run-ons in the story, but this sounded like it could be a children's book almost!"
great story
"I loved the overall idea of the story, although there were a couple of sentences that needed a bit more detail. I had a great visual of the story which was great. you may also want to look over on the structure on the sentence, keep up the good work."
Good plot
"The storyline is very good, and I liked the development of the characters. However, I think the author could improve by looking back over the sentence structure throughout. All in all, I enjoyed it. Keep writing :) "
