Rachel Nascimento

I love to write, miraculous is life, and reading is the best thing on earth!

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great story

I loved the overall idea of the story, although there were a couple of sentences that needed a bit more detail. I had a great visual of the story which was great. you may also want to look over on the structure on the sentence, keep up the good work.

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