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Breathtaking

"That's really a nice novel with an amazing plot, I heard the story before and I needed to know the details. And I have not wasted my time in reading this one. I recommend to read this one even if you are not historic novels concerned. Good job, "

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Wow

"Your story was beautifully bold. I simply loved and I came across it on tumblr, your sister's friend posted about it I guess. I've been following it for a long while. The plot, the emotions, the feels are very real. It is authentic. I know you've got so many reviews you'll probably not read this but I just had to write. Masha Allah, May Allah grant you all the success"

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Wow

"Your story was beautifully bold. I simply loved and I came across it on tumblr, your sister's friend posted about it I guess. I've been following it for a long while. The plot, the emotions, the feels are very real. It is authentic. I know you've got so many reviews you'll probably not read this but I just had to write. Masha Allah, May Allah grant you all the success"

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Refreshing Change

"*SPOILERS AHEAD. DON'T READ IF THEY BOTHER YOU* In a time when Muslims are either vehemently opposed to propounding good literature, or cannot get their heads out of cheesy (haraam-ish) romance novels, this book is what we need to set a new trend. Now that I have completed my sweeping generalisation which I myself acknowledge is incorrect, allow me to "critique" your work. It's fantastic Ma sha Allah! I completed this a while back on Wattpad. Apart from the long chapters (didn't really bother me but I guess the mainstream crowd doesn't dig them), I was hooked. I still remember Ishaq's Mortal Kombat reference :P The fight scenes were well executed and apart from that, all the characters interacted with ways expected of them. Though I'm not sure whether I'm the biggest fan of Juan being the stereotypical backstabber. You should definitely update the sequel. I know you're busy and all but when you spare a breather, do consider it."

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No comment!

"A wonderful book. A MUST READ. It has unbelievable plot with lots of twists. I personally can't wait for it all to be published I got hooked straight away"

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AAA!!!!!

"Amazing!!! Amusing!! Awesome!!! Fantastic!! Great!! There is not even a word that fits for it!! EFO reminds me of a lot of stories in Islam. I love the story from begging to end. It it has a bit of romance, with a lot of action and adventure, yet it's very informational. Subhan Allāh! It's very hard to find a story now a days the features Islamic advice and is interesting, but EFO was right on point. And it's Not cliché at all. Mark my word. But yet, it's still amusing. I never really recommend a book unless its great, but this is deserves more than recommendation. It deserves a WIN. May Allāh bless the author!"

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Stunning Creation

"Much like successful books, this one has a perfect balance of genre. The gripping plot and realistic characters introduce the readers to a place of chaos. The description of a world beyond today fits the scene of war perfectly as it shows how we seem to move back in time while moving forward. Overall, it is a story to treasure. Ma Shaa Allah."

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Epitome of talent!

"Very well written and very engrossing. A huge fan of your work! I'm addicted to your work, literally. I would recommend everyone to read this, since it's one of those books that you can't put down, no matter what. You're very talented, MashaAllah. Keep writing amazing stories and stay blessed x"

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Fantastic!

"Very well written and has incredible imagery, making you feel absorbed in the book. There are unique characters which you end up feeling extremely attached to. Though I don't usually read books of this genre, I would definitely recommend this story to others. Again, I must praise the writer in his writing skills! The amazing plot (or plots) has been executed excellently."

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Highly recommended

"I loved this book! The plot is so original, I've never read anything like it. Everything comes alive and you can feel all the emotions the author is describing. The action scenes are real page turners, excellent descriptions. I definitely recommend this read :)"

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Hooked!

"This story has completely and utterly had me gripped from the start! The authors style of writing is flawless and eloquent. For those action loving bookaholics this tale is most definitely a must read! Use of English grammar and language in general is completely on point. Certainly left me wanting more! Looking forward to the next one... He definitely deserves to win!"

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A must read!!

"Ma Sha Allah the story is very well written , it is one of the best books I've ever read and I would definitely recommend others to read it too. Loved the characters (Y) :D It's completely different from the other books I have ever read , it's got a unique plot and gets you hooked to it till the end of the book."

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It Is Indeed A Hidden Gem!!!!

""Empires Of Faith" is the best Islamic fiction I have read! by "Islamic" is doesn't mean that it's only meant for Muslims,no!any individual can read it and I'm sure you gonna enjoy it as much as I did.!!This is the book which gonna keep you engaged until you reach the end of it.Author has done an amazing job,the scenes are so well described that you feel like you're actually there witnessing every moment.The book portrays different persons' journey set for the same mission,and the best thing is that Author has worked on every individual characters.You get to see sweet sibling bond,friendship,a cute (Halal)love story,and mostly ACTION!It is truly entertaining and equally informative one!Through out the book there are beautiful reminders which will enhance your knowledge :) while reading this book I cried,I laughed,I got excited,my heart rates were beyond normal limits at every action packed scenes!all in all I really ENJOYED it!!I would love to see this on my bookshelf (In Sha Allah) !wouldn't mind reading it again and again! I wish this wins because It is indeed a Hidden Gem!"

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Empires of AWESOMENESS

"Such a great book! It captures your interest with its detailed plots and complex characters., who you'll fall in love with. The setting is unique and the storyline is refreshingly different, taking you on a journey that will have you hooked. The author has a brilliant sense of humor and great descriptive skills which livens things up. A great work by a great writer!"

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Talented Is Just The Beginning...

"This piece of writing is more than just letters across a screen. Its more than just 40 chapters. Its a different world. And in that world, you get to experience so many things. I mean, you're practically sucked in there and once you just keep reading it gets harder and harder to get out. This story overall is just magnificent. You won't find any other one like it. Its just way too unique and AWESOME! This writer's plot is pure genius. Its that one book you've never seen before. And the story just moves so effortlessly, pouring out different times and stories that sometime you might even feel like you - yourself - are in the story. Another thing I have to point out is that, you never have to worry about wanting to scream out in frustration when an author doesn't edit because this author is all about perfection. I'm sure you won't find more than one error. You won't regret reading this soon to be ( In Sha Allah ) published novel :)"

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Amaaazzinnggg!!

"This is such a unique plot and it got me hooked straight away! I fell in love with the characters and it's so gripping and fascinating, I would definitely buy this book, no doubt! Wow, the writing style is very engaging and overall story is wonderful and different, definitely worth a read :)"

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Empires Of Faith

"Subhannallah, really and amazing read! It's a book that catches one's attention quickly, and keeps you excited throughout. The writer really has a way with words, and the suspense created, as well as description and the way that the different scenes are portrayed (the words used, the way they're written) is excellent and it can be seen that a lot of thought has been put into it. A book that I would definitely recommend to one and all, for I certainly enjoyed it thoroughly."

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An absolutely amazing and thrilling read

"In this book alot of events happen that keep the reader glued to their spot...never hoping to leave. As the plot unfolds...you are evident to many different characters and settings. This book showcases Love,Sacrifice,Homour,but most importantly...Religion The authors writing style enhances the message of the story as well as brings the characters and settings to life. I absolutely enjoyed this book and hope you do too!"

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Amazing so far!

"This story so far is great. The plot and setting are intriguingly unique, and i love the eloquent style the author uses. Desert_Son, you're doing a great job so far. I love Muhammad's character already, he seems to be a a grounded character drawn into everything and this will be a heroic journey for him. Though I do wonder why his wife couldn't go with him or he couldn't stay until the baby was born or something. I guess i'll find out. Deeply invested now, can't wait to read on and I hope this wins, i would love this on my bookshelf! Definitely recommend it to anyone who loves action EDIT: WOW, it's only getting better. The different parts and unique settings are refreshing. Muhammad is still my favorite so far but I like this Ishaq guy and Gabriel as well. the parts with General Isa were quite interesting, and surprisingly fun. The different sagas are very entertaining and I do hope to see more soon."

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Simply rivetting.

"Empires of Faith is a book that will keep you gripped. The action is just simply awesome!!! begins a bit slowly but as you keep reading you understand why. The authors writing style is refreshing and descriptive as though you are actually there."

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