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Chronicles of the Wolf 1

"Very gripping and detailed. Interesting beginning."

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Fantastic story

"Wonderful, wonderful and just wonderful!! I hope you write a third book!"

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Interesting story and worth the read.

"This is a very interesting story about a group of people find some sort of treasure. It reminds me about Indiana Jones theme. The author makes a clear description of the setting and characters which enable me to visualize how the place or the people looked like. Though, I always ended up with weird ones because that's how my imagination works 😂 Love the names though! It's hard to pronounce sometimes but they are very unique bunch of names. Grammar and punctuation isn't my forte when written or reading book so I'm not going far for that. I'm struggling with the same thing too. Anyway, this book is a jewel. Good work, author. I'm looking forward to read some more of your works. "

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A rare find indeed.

"This is a rare read. A diamond in the rough.The essence of this story is brilliant and with a bit of editing the punctuation and grammar, this book has the potential to reach publication status. Think of this story in these terms: Stargate meets Star Trek meets Indiana Jones. If I had the time I would totally love to edit this book. Keep up the good work and polish, polish, polish ! :)"

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A great adventure!

"This story is a must for anyone that loves a great adventure. I found the first two chapters were a little jarring and overly full of details. Which I know set the world up but they didn't make me want to read on. I did however and was pleasantly surprised at how easily it flowed and that it had a good pace. I love both main characters and was dazzled by their high tech gadgets versus basic gut instincts, or maybe it is a mix of both. I thought you brought your world to life over a few chapters but once you had me in I needed to keep reading. I also recommend you do some editing runs on your work as some of the mistakes take away from the pace and elegance of your writing. I recommend this book to all. I urge this writer to not only polish their work but to keep on writing."

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Awesome Story Framework!!

"Absolutely in love with the unique set-up of this story. It is completely different from what I am used to. The story had me hooked on to it when it mentioned "mysterious moon" and "legendary treasure." Although the beginning does feel a tad bit info-dumpy(I mean those names really need some getting used to) I understand that it is necessary for world-building but hey, do go easy on us :-) But second chapter onwards the story really picks up pace. A very unique main character and I love how the dialogue flows so easily between the characters. I'm very excited to see how this will turn out. Overall a very captivating story, that catches you and doesn't let you go."

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