What is your opinion?
A good read!
"I apologize for taking so long for the review. I have to say that fantasy (vampire/werewolves) stories are not my thing but your writing has definitely made me hooked onto this one. So far it is a nice story and I would want to see how you, as an author, unfold the characters. However, I would really suggest you to consider the blurb. I found it a bit confusing and had to go back and forth to make sense. But the writing throughout the length of the story is flawless and without any error. Even though it is just few chapters, I really found the writing style fascinating. The tempo is perfect and so are well-described scenes. Keep writing and updating frequenting."
interesting
"the plot is interesting. a little confusing but can not wait to read more."
Interesting Read!
"This review took me forever to get to, sorry about that. This story is amazing, it will turn out to be a novel I need to read if you end up getting the time to finish it. I found some parts a little confusing, some words are repeated too many times close together, and the story needs some punctuation and grammar work but other than that I think it is a well developed story that is on it's way to be something really exciting. Character development is my favourite part of writing, getting to see one's character come to life, and these characters of yours are developing fantastically. I hope you are able to finish this some day as I look forward to reading it."
Revision
"The use of grammarly and the other one weren't really for Fiction purpose(In my own opinion) because it turns your words seems to be forced. It hadn't me hooked, my curiosity hadn't plucked out but my confusion did. Review points: -Paragraph and sentence reconstruction. I find the whole story confusing. -Redundant word appear here and there. -the conversation doesn't feel real, I can't feel the characters. -The story turned out to be monotonous. I can't hear the Writing voice. -World building and Character build up was insufficient. -The first chapters seems not to give me any Plot build up and Character development. -Right use of terms, tell us who's POV is that, referring only to three(First person, Second Person or Third Person POV) -A research will also help This book was good, I'm seeing the plot very well. But you need to consider revising this whole book, improve it and bear in mind those points I have given you :) Goodluck Author, I'll be looking forward for this book. P.S. this is constructive criticism, All i want is to help you Improve your book/s."
Interesting Read
"I do not normally read things this...violent I guess the word would be. The plot is interesting. The writing itself, in my opinion seems kinda forced? It's a bit jarring and takes me out of the book. That being said, it definitely wasn't bad. Albeit a bit confusing. It could turn into something quite good with the right amount of editing."
