What is your opinion?
Invisible
"First time reading this type of story! Good story so far "
Cursed with oblivion
"I was invested from the beginning. Well done author 👏❤️"
I have no criticism
"Dude I'm 4 paragraphs in and I'm already obsessed"
Enticing
"Soft and sweet. Im intersted"
Interesting Plot
"Originally read it because the plot was interesting. I feel so much for the main character who's existence is basically non-existent except for her sister. The book does a good job depicting depression and loneliness. Hopefully it updates soon so I can finish reading it."
Amazing
"So far this story is amazing I feel Darcey! "
Heart Warming
"When I first started reading this, I wasn’t that interested because I do not usually read stories like this. However, as I kept reading I started to really connect with the characters in the story. At points I actually felt my heart hurt for Darcey, she didn’t deserve what was happening to her every time she was ignored. Shawn as-well, but once they found each other and really connected I felt my heart elate and the whole situation made me so happy. You do an amazing job with really bringing your story to life and the imagery is lively. Can’t wait for more!!"
Amazing
"I loved this story so much! It started out with a girl who felt rejected and planned to run away from everything she ever knew because nobody could see her. Then she met her perfect match who had the total opposite problem and they were amazing together! I figured that they would end up together, because the book was labeled as a romance after all. Overall, I enjoyed the story and I thought it was quite creative and well written. Keep up the good work!"
Holly fuck my heart
"This shit......this shit right here, ...............is some good shit, no not good, ..........fucking great......................goddamn amazing fucking shit right here"
A Wonderful Start
"Cursed with Oblivion has a wonderful start and is a delightful read for anyone who longs for romance. The author spun a thrilling tale of a girl cursed with oblivion, a boy blessed with attention, and a story of love. The only reason I took a star away is because I'm not a fan of romance. However, if I were a fan, than I would've given this book five stars. Keep writing! -Ellie"
Review
"I love the idea of the story. It is unique and in a world were are ideas have been done millions of times, that is saying a lot. I like the style of the story, but I would like it to lead to something. It is fine to show how the curse affects her, but I would like to move on to either breaking the cure, learning to live with it or falling in love with Shawn... I deduct a point for grammar - always something to correct."
Winter story with a cup of hot chocolate
"The idea is great. Two opposite characters, which were collided by fate. It reminds about one movie with Bruce Willis. What do the story has? The slow introduction into the story. They author just take your hand and open a curtain of the world, which created. As a museum that story, and you are viewing every part of it carefully and with understanding of what is happening. For me personally, I caught phrases, which were good and unusual, but so beautiful, so I wrote them down in my vocabulary. Only once or twice I caught myself on a thought that, maybe, here I would have changed the clause, but it wasn’t often. Sometimes I didn’t understand characters’ behavior, but the good point is I want to understand them, I have questions, and I want to get my answers, that’s why it was interesting to follow the story and scroll it till the end and would like to know the end of the story, because I know the most interesting part is just ahead. Let’s, see where their relationship goes."
Great book
"This is a great book and it has a lot of potentials. There are no grammar mistakes. I don't mean to be rude or anything but I am pretty sure that you want to improve this story. These are only the first few chapters but in the upcoming ones can you make them more interesting? But this is a great book I can't wait to see where you go with it."
It is oka bun it sould have must be alittli good
"Ti is very nice infact i didn't finish it but it id oka"
Cursed with Oblivion
"Solid start~ I felt I could connect to Darcey. More importantly, the details made me feel present. I smelled the coffee!"
