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So good!

"The emotional rollercoaster is so good!! These kids are going through so much and I canโ€™t wait to see where this journey takes them. Highly recommend this!"

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Awesome ๐Ÿ‘Œ

"I loved it all. I thought the story was written well."

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The Grim Reaper

"So far, I am in love with this book or novel or whatever this is this is pretty much my first book I picked up. I do not read. I read the first chapter, and I was like hooked very good punctuation explaining things very well written, I hope thereโ€™s more"

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I LOVE IT.. 5 ๐Ÿคฉ โญโญโญโญโญ

"I LOVE IT โญโญโญโญโญ"

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The Grim Reaper The Grim Reaper Duology Book 1

"When are you going to do book 2 Please say soon ๐Ÿ™‚ please very good book cant wait to read book 2 of this loved it ๐Ÿ˜Š "

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The grim reaper

"It was scary, interesting had me on the edge of my seat. It did seem a bit long and at times he made mistakes. Made it confusing at times so he needs to proofread his work but all in all it was a good story with great characters , plot etcโ€ฆ. "

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The Grim Reaper

"This is such a great story! I would recommend reading it, the plot was awesome "

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Nice work, I must say. I feel like I'm there in the story while reading it.

"This is the first book I've read here. A great start for me! Thanks author.๐ŸŒŸ"

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The Grim Reaper

"Wait, What?!?!?! What happened!!!! Donโ€™t leave me hanging!!!!!"

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Great JOB

"Loved the story from the start. All the twist and turns. the story was very creative and kept me wanting more. I couldn't stop reading until the end. Kept me on the edge until it was solved. Hated what happened to Cole. Sad. But the ending was UGH... I understand why but can't just one story have a potential happy ending. LOL"

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Another one

"Jacinta has done it again. She's weaved a story using her lightning skills and awe-inspiring talent to keep a reader on the edge of their seat in the suspense. With the plot twist positioned just right (so it hits you like a ton of bricks) and the right characters, she's created yet another amazing book. I'm just waiting for an Oscar or the news of a Best-selling author from her. And, with this book, she will eventually get one."

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Yeet

"Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet Yeet"

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WOW!

"This story was enjoyable and kept me going and wanting for more. I thoroughly enjoyed it and will be back for the second book! Your style is unique and you make it your own and it easy to get lost in the story."

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A Thoroughly Enjoyable Book

"It's always a pleasure to read a book by an author who takes her craft seriously and takes every opportunity to improve her skills. This is an exciting, well-written story with clear characters and excellent dialogue. It's the sort of book it's difficult to put down. With greater consistency of style JMH_writer will be a force to be reckoned with. I can highly recommend this very good work."

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AMAZING THRILLER!!

"I absolutely LOVED this book!! It kept you on the edge of your seat the entire time! I couldn't wait to read each chapter as the story progressed! I can't wait for the sequel, it's going to be amazing to see all the characters again! Keep up the good work, you've really outdone yourself with this one โ™ฅโ™ฅ"

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The Grim Reaper

"Each chapter brings a new surprise and ends on a cliffhanger, making it almost impossible to put down! The author is great at using suspence. There is a good balance of action and dialogue. I would like to see a little more description in places, but overall this book has a good, solid plot, strong characters and a very talented author. I'll definitely be sticking around to finish this!"

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Gripping

"I love the way how you did the blurb/ introduction, so gripping. It's not just about me liking books like these but it's the fact that you structured it in such a way that you gave a lot of information without it being crowded or us wanting to skip the intro to see what's it about. You left us mystified, curisous and slightly chilled, knowing that the person could be right around the corner. We didn't have to read the entire book to find that out but it's right there, leaving us to wonder if the author can give is a hint so carefreely what do we really have in store for this book? It's an immediate like and download for me, can't wait to read more, the intro alone got me hooked"

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The Grim Reaper

"I love a book that keeps you guessing! "

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Couldn't Stop Reading

"This is rare piece. You touch it and you simply want to read to the end. I absolutely love it."

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Great Beginning!

"Even though this is a fairly new story with only one chapter so far, I feel there is already a sense of building up in it. The story overall in the first chapter was interesting as to set the pace and place for the readers to pick up. It was really easy to grasp the pace, and it's actually kinda chilling to think of a mini-purge by a killer. For improvements/ideas, I think a stronger focus on horror would be nice since it so far surrounds the main character trying to avenge his friend. Maybe a plot twist? The Grim Reaper's identity? Cliffhanger end? Very, very good beginning. Looking forward to the updates!"

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