What is your opinion?
The girl who lived in the shadow
"Loving this book and author. Waiting patiently for more chapters."
Engaging
"I would say this is a very nice plot for a story! I did notice a few grammatical errors and punctuation errors, but if you work on those this story can really go somewhere! The way you write is nice, how you don’t leave out a detail, I’m really engaged in it! I can’t wait to read more:)"
The girl who lived in the shadows
"So far this is great. The depth of the characters and the many view points give this story an extra bit of mystery. The plot has many twisted and turns it keep it interesting and fresh. I can’t wait to finish this. 🖤🖤🖤"
Amazing
"This book is very awesome. The prologue had really captured my interest and I would love to read more. I am a fan of mysteries and yours was just awesome "
The girl who lived in the shadow
"At first, i was like "what" and then I am like "wow" - this just shows that the suspensions and mystery is really cool and i really enjoyed it. However, some of your paragraphs were too long for my liking but that's just a minor mistake - maybe you can break them up into two or something else? But overall, really liked the plot of it!"
Thrilling!
"The vivid descriptions, character development, and taunting mystery make this book stand out from the others. Be warned: it is not for the faint of heart or mind. You will be left speechless and full of curiosity."
Complete it
"Complete it"
The girl who lived in the shadow
"I really love how this story was written. There is so much suspense and mystery, it kept me intriguing throughout the book. I like how the story is being told from different point of views in order to understand each scene better. Can't wait to read more of this!"
Is this the end of the hook we it says "a girl"
"Is page 168 the end of the book"
Very Mysterious!
"The first few chapters are very attention grabbing. It's like they know what's going on, but you don't know it; and you want to keep reading to find out. Very unique! Also, I like how the story develop through 2 characters with a past to go off on, keeps the mystery going. There are some minor grammar issues but that can be fixed easily. I really enjoyed reading this, keep it up!"
Compelling
"This is a great story. It is told through the eyes of a cast of characters who don't always tell you everything, giving it a layer of mystery. Most chapters end in a cliffhanger which makes it more compelling. As I was reading I couldn't help but think this would make a great television show, it gave me a lot of "Pretty Little Liars" vibes, a show that I normally wouldn't watch but ended up getting suckered in anyway, with all that mystery and cliffhangers. There were a few grammatical errors but overall pretty impressive, especially since the author doesn't speak English as her first language. I highly recommend that you give this a shot, if you like murder and mystery."
The girl who lived in the shadow
"An interesting mystery. The interconnection between the two girls, Hana and Monica, is nicely set up and very intriguing. Small town murder suspense that can unfold into a great story."
The girl with the secret
"So far so good"
The girl who lived in the shadow
"Needs updates"
