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7 princesses

"Loved all of the princesses and their magical journey. Couldn’t pick just one favorite, would love to read another story about each and every one of them. "

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A Brilliant Story

"It was an utterly original story loosely taken from a well-known story. The sisters were all unique with their own personalities, and though it was a bit tricky to remember whether Raia was the artist or the kleptomatic, or if or if the tomboy was Cliodine at the start, as it progressed it was easy to tell them apart. All the characters, especially the king, had layers and depth to them, both positive and negative traits. The king was my favourite character, because he had his controversial opinions and bad decisions, but was willing to change for the better because he loves his daughters. Excellent, and wanting to see more fairy tales from this talented writer! Will buy if it ever pops up in stores."

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So talented!!

"I really hope to see your books on bookstore shelves very soon because you are extremely talented!! Thank you for sharing your great work with us!!"

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The secret of seven princesses

"Excellent story line and writing. Finished it in one sitting. "

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I can't stop reading

"Please let the spell be broken. They can't help themselves. "

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It is just more than I can ever imagine

"God I loved it.... Your story has every mixture of emotion required for a reader to read a story... It has humor, centiments, cute romance, courage, fun, a very good plot , beautiful way of writing it.... Loved it alot and keep going and sprinkle your magic through your words in this world... Haha it was like a spell to me and I can't stop reading it until I finished it... "

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The Secret of the Seven Princesses

"Such a cute story. I found myself rooting for the girls, but never more than when they handled the contestants. Ty was certainly the only one worthy of the crown. Though each Princess is destined for true love, still I don't see them drifting away from each other. With that in mind, I hope you can keep them all together in your sequals. I can't wait to read more and I wish you the best of success. 🌹"

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The secret of the seven princesses

"It was beautiful! Magical and had this storyteller quality that just draws you in and makes you live the story"

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Recommended to read

"I really enjoyed reading this, and at the last chapter I had goosebumps down my arms while reading the ending! I hope others will take time to read this as well."

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A Work of Art

"This book is just amazing! I would say it was a work of art. I hardly ever read a story like this BUT when I first started I couldn't stop reading until the end! I will remember this story when I am raising my child in the future. Thank you for writing! I encourage you to write more even publish a few books. "

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The BEST BOOK ever

"When I first started to read it it was just like 12 dancing princesses but then it changed its truly awesome ...and ah! I can't forget their food fights these were so awesome I m waiting for more stories of princesses!!"

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Wonderful recreation!!

"At first when I read this book I thought it was the same a the twelve dancing princess.but as you get deeper you see a lot of change in the plot.the author is having a unique style of making humour in a tensed atmosphere. I couldn't stop myself from laughing about the description of what happened to the people who came to win the contest. Altogether it was a humourous and good plot.i loved reading it.the last part is what I didn't expect but it was a great ending."

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Diamond Out The Rough

"Dear Elysian III, I can find no words worthy to describe this story. Having read the Flight Of The Five Swans first (being a great lover of the original tale), I enjoyed that one so greatly I had to read the first book as well! You are an extraordinarily gifted and wonderful writer, your love and passion shines through every line of your fantastic tale. I fell in love with all the characters portrayed in both fairytale retellings at first sight (or should I say read), their personalities, interests, motives and behavior are so well-written, colorful and realistic. Speaking of characters, I particularly enjoyed wily, mysterious Petra and Thaleia the Tomboy - may I ask whether you are planning a third installment in this beautiful series? I'd also like to compliment your marvelous vocabulary, which deserves way more than five stars! Overall this book is a highly entertaining and enjoyable read with likeable and deep characters, breathtaking twists and the perfect amount of humor and drama, and one I would strongly recommend to everyone in search of a heartwarming and exciting tale! "

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Adorable

"Depicting seven princesses in one story is no easy feat, but Elysian was able to clearly differentiate all of them on the very first chapter. Their descriptions were spot on and their quirks memorable, and I'm satisfied to see all of them equally contribute to the story, no princess left behind. I love the depth of the main characters and the way in which the supporting ones, like Weston, Valeria, and Ty, were shown when they weren't serving the royal family. I simply love the story! However, another round or two of proofreading is needed. Halfway through, the princesses' bedchamber babysitter, who was first named Justine, had her name switched to Judith and then back to Justine for the rest of the story. While it stopped bothering me once I got used to it, the first instance of the change in name slightly confused me. There was also a lapse in grammar in the last few chapters, so rereading would really help. Other than those two small issues, I'd say the story was absolutely adorable!"

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Eloquent and moving

"Hi Elysian, Thank you for sharing your story here! It is eloquently written, warm, moving and full of intrigue. You start with a powerful opening; setting the scene well and then suddenly disrupting the calm with an attack on our main character. The scene where Eralie speaks to her mother for the last time is heart-breaking and you convey the emotion so well that we are drawn into the story. Your professional writing style means that the reader becomes absorbed in the story - I can easily imagine finding this in a book-shop and hopefully one day it will be. Best of luck with it! Mike Born Of The Flame"

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Simply amazing

"I have to say this has become a rival to my other top two favourite books of all time. The plot, characters and descriptions are just enough to make me never want to put this down... In fact I read it all in one day! I really want to thank you for writing this story. I simply loved it and I hope to buy it off a shelf some day! XD"

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