What is your opinion?
the 7th sense
"great story!"
Raw.
"You have done something, I have not seen in a long time about the use and potrayel of emotions which is maudlin and simply poignant. Your cohesion of writing is admirable and your descriptions, unique, it seperates you from most authors, use it to your advantage."
Wow
"very nise"
7th sense
"This book was amazing. It had me on the edge of my seat every mintue. So many different emotions ran through my head. I absolutely love this book. It is a wonderful love story."
Worth At Least A Quick Read
"I have a few things to say about this book and why it's worhy to be read. First up, interesting plot point. I like how you managed to incorporate some psychological properties here. I could definitely see some influences of Synesthesia from the heroine. The reason why I mentioned Synesthesia is because of the way your writing style describes emotion as if they are perceived directly by our different types of senses may it be touch, sight, smell or taste. Second, with great power comes great responsibility. Cliché but I feel like the way the heroine uses her power borders more on selfish reasons rather than selfless acts which is good because that leaves room for character development. I find it intriguing to see where her moral compass leads her. Third, the character's diction is appropriate to their personality and the setting of the plot. A lot of people neglect to consider this and would unknowingly insert coloqial terms here and there without considering the theme, the mood and the direction where the setting takes place. Lastly, this is more than a romantic book (assuming that it is - I'm not entirely sure). Still, I'm a romantic and I prefer romantic books over most genres. However, from how the story is heading I wouldn't mind if you put off any romantic possiblilities. Though, I am intrigued of thw main heroine sharing a love triangle woth the prince and Briar. So far, that's all I can say. For the AFIs (or as I put it, areas for improvement): minor grammar errors - nothing a few editong won't fix."
Incredible start!
"I was hooked from beginning to end. I love how cunning and strong the main character is, not falling into the cliche category of a damsel in distress nor an overpowered female character. The world is also very enthralling and I will love to see it evolve more. Besides small grammatical errors (which can be fixed with Grammarly), this is a wonderful start of a fantastic tale that I will be interested to see unfold."
one of a kind
"I have never before read a book such as yours. It truly is one of a kind and I can't wait to see where this goes. You should try to get it published. Maybe you should try for the inkitt novel contest. and continue to write this story"
The 7th Sense
"Wow. I love how the reader is placed in immediate action. This is a very original concept and extremely well-written. Looking forward to more."
Original Plot and Clever Ability
"I’ll update my review once the story is completed, but the author obviously has a gift for writing. If you’re looking for more originality this is a good read. I loved the descriptions and the protagonists power, which was cleverly explained. I’m not hard core into grammar, but everything flowed and felt polished. I can’t wait to read more. "
