What is your opinion?
I Loved It
"When I saw the repetition, I was unsure of what I'd feel for the poem, but wow it was fantastic! The way you characterised the changes of the heart with metaphors of the sea and the stars, of waves taking prisoners... I loved it. This was an original, enjoyable, heart-touching poem. Keep going!"
Amazing!
"I really love this poem and the way it's written, I can easily grasp the story it's telling. The meaning behind it is truly beautiful as well. Keep up the good work!"
wow
"So far this is really great you should continue to develop this."
Not bad.
"OK. This one still needs more development. Usually I'm telling people they need to make their work larger but in this one you have actually made it a little too long. The metaphor of the heart and the mind? I liked those but they're still not quite right. Also, you start out the piece by talking about YOU and then at the end we get to the man and the woman. I think you can just cut the man and the woman out of this piece and dig around some more on how to finish this. All in all, I enjoyed it. It's just not done yet."
