What is your opinion?
Captivating
"I think this opening is very captivating. It makes me wonder what their past is and why he HAD to kill her even though they were clearly in love. I would definitely read on to find out what had happened between them. I wish there were more chapters to review, but from what I read the author is talented at setting a scene and sparking interest to read further. I'm no grammar expert, but I noticed no mistakes in punctuation and spelling. Everything was clear and well-written. Overall this was a promising start to an interesting story. "
Wow!
"I was pleasantly surprised by your storytelling style! I loved this prologue, it made me ask a lot of questions. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter!"
Such a Gripping start!
"The summary of your story was very engaging and lured me in immediately - I couldn't wait to get started! As I read the prologue, I could picture everything so clearly and I was on the edge of my seat the whole time, wondering just who "he" was. It makes me want to read more, and I look forward to what's to come! Very good job!"
Makes you want to read more
"Good beginning - makes you asks a lot of question in a good way."
Enthralling!
"First of all, wow. This beginning is great! It draws the reader in so they want more. I'm intrigued to see what happens next. And it's sad, which some would say isn't a good thing, but in my opinion, if a story doesn't make me feel something, it's not worth reading. Thanks for writing! Keep it up : )"
Captivating!
"Absolutely loved your story. Very vivid imagery; I could feel as if I was there. What you have so far is good to be a short story in itself! Keep writing, and if this is truly a work in progress, then I can't wait to read the rest of it."
Great!
"Loved the beginning!"
Good start
"Keeps you engaged to know more."
