What is your opinion?
Beyond
"This story has an amazing plot, portrayed by an intriguing style and it's only four chapters so far! I can only imagine the places that this story is going to go. Highly recommend!"
I Love It!
"The story itself is wonderful, far more unique than so many others in this genre. The writing style has a very storytelling feel, which only makes it all the better. I did notice a couple of minor technical mistakes, but nothing too major."
Hooked!
"I loved how you kinda alternate their point of views in the chapters because the readers would get to see both sides of the story. The plot of your story is quite intriguing and I have to say I love all the raw emotions you put into the main character. I'm looking forward to see how you would continue this story! :)"
Good job!
"You are so good at writing! I would totally buy this book, Keep writing!"
PLOT is AWESOME!
"Your plot is awesome! I love the way you describe, The only thing missing is that story only has first chapter! You need to write more if you want to gain more readers. But anyway your work is awesome! I loved it! Keep writing!"
Awesomely amazing
"I don't know what to write. It's awesome! I just want more. I love the starting but author you gotta update I am loving this story. the plot is amazing! Writing style is awesome!"
Ember in the Ice
"I like it. You've written it nicely, with Audrey's emotions described in a very realistic way. I'd like to suggest that you don't go too far with the 'love at first sight' thing, but it's not bad the way it is. The chapters so far are good. I'm waiting for the next chapters."
; )
"Different plot than usual. Very interesting. Love to read more :)"
Good Story Telling...
"It is hard to give a review of a story by just reading a single chapter because I don't know what's coming next. But girl you got me hooked from the first to the last sentence. The writing style is good, it would be better if you gave just a little more description about things happening and the character's feelings, that is important when you write in narrative view. I loved the overall plot of it. A really good approach and your story telling is awesome. I would love to see Audrey with Atlas but that's up to you, I haven't even read the second chapter. Just make sure it doesn't get confusing and give more details. You keep writing gurl, I see you with a bright future. Can't wait to read more."
