What is your opinion?
Hospital Grace
"The plot is unexpected. The allusion that creates the prologue in the experimental center and the dehumanization of Annabeth hooks the reader instantly. The mother-daughter relationship is a breath of fresh air, most stories have good relationships, or the mother is dead. I hope for new updates soon."
Relative describing is wow
"This was the best description of things I have ever read. The way you compare them kike it shttered as glass and fish etc. The way you describe it by comparing it to other things is what I loved. The concept is amazing and it made me ask a few questions and got me hooked. Amazing keep it up."
Interesting
"The story focuses on mystery and questions. I did not found it boring, but there’s room for more character development in order for the readers to better connect with them. The setting is interesting, being in the distant future, with the people acting as they are and the hospital being the main focus... at least in the present chapters. The grammar and typos needs to improve. I saw many mistakes that can be easily corrected. They didn’t bothered me, but it could make other readers frown at this. I will come back when new content will be written, that’s for sure. "
I like it
"This is very interesting! I'd love to see where this story is going."
Great Start!
"So far it's really interesting and descriptive. It's easy to see that you're used to writing poetry due to the amount of literary devices in your writing. The switching of the characters in each chapter is a little confusing and get's me a little lost in the story sometime, but the plot is really interesting and unique so far! There are also a few facts that don't add up in the story, which might have been due to my confusion with the character switching and some grammatical errors. So far, it's an interesting story and I'm excited to see how it will unfold."
Wow
"Wow. Definitely a new genre. I'd love to read more soon..."
Beautifully written
"This story is written with such interesting descriptions; I look forward to reading more of your work! One thing that I did notice is that you go between past tense and present tense a lot; if you want constructive criticism that's what I've got for you. :) Otherwise, you've got an amazing storyline and very few errors with spelling and grammar!"
Unique
"The concept is exceptionally good! The allusion of the compass to approach life as such was really interesting. Maybe a few punctuation errors to tweak here and there, but it turned out really well considering they weren't as noticeable. Can't wait for more!"
Not sure yet
"This is still a work in progressive, so I am not quite sure what to make of this, but at the same time I know my review is long overdue. The biggest thing I noticed was the changes between past and present tense that need fo be adjusted. I'm also not quite feeling a hook with these chapters yet which is definitely important if you want to keep a reader interested. I'll keep reading as the chapters get updated and edit my review accordingly. Good luck! "
An Interesting Work in Progress
"This book is in the vein of Maze Runner and Divergent and lovers of dystopian novels will enjoy it. The struggle of this book is its grammar and ability to communicate clearly, but there are moments of great description and similes. The book is not done, and these chapters need some cleaning up, but the potential is there for an interesting sci fi novel."
