What is your opinion?
Damn! Excellent short story!
"This short story is just raw emotion. The writing is very good and conveys the message beautifully, and I think that most people, including myself, can really empathize with the protagonist. Wow, the whole idea of being safer in imagination or drawn into another world other than your own in order not to get hurt is described amazingly in this! Love it! Really feeling it!"
beautiful!
"@CottonCandySkies your story was so beautiful and heart-warming. it was again beautiful really. I loved the quiet shyness of Lillian. I get her shyness because I'm exactly like her. rather than talking to a person, I'd rather lose myself to an unknown world where I didn't need to think about things and I just needed to lose myself to the imagination. it was such a good story and I encourage you to continue and I can't wait to see more of your works. thankyou for the tips you've given and I hope you become really successful with this."
Buttercups, Dasies and Lilies
"This amazing short story describes something that we all have been through in our lives. However, the descriptions are so detailed and beautiful that they captivate the reader's attention and make him feel emotions he didnt expect. The description of the simple situation we've all found ourselves in once or twice, makes us see things from another point of view and understand the main hero more than we could ever imagine. Great work👏👏👏"
Interesting
"I enjoyed the short story...Even if it is short. I loved the way it was complex yet so simple. I am suggesting that you can write a proper story based on this short story, yet giving it a further flourish of beginning, middle and end. If given enough detail and chapters, you might get a lot of views and likes. Well done on engaging the reader and a good plot. So I will suggest again you writing a novel based on this short story."
