What is your opinion?
Highly recommend
"I’m really interested to know more about what they’re dreams mean. There seems to be a lot of symbolism in them. This author truly deserves a round of applause once again I’ve been immersed into a completely unique plot and looking forward for the updates to come. I also find it note worthy that the authors writing dose not over lap I’m not finding any over used terms or strong similarities that would make this book feel in anyway like her others. It takes real talent to achieve that."
Promising
"The story is interesting and intriguing. It has a marvelous unique touch, as I've told you before, being a wolf sotry with African American plus a Hispanic. That fact makes me enjoy it even more being a Latina myself. Furthermore, there are some minimal grammatical errors that if fixed, will make the story flow even better. Keep up the amazing work and good luck! "
Impressed
"I am very impressed on the detail the author has placed in the chapters...for I am glued to the story based on the descriptions of the surroundings, emotions, desire and fear all wrapped in a bow for the readers to unravel. Glad it is not a completed story or I would be upset knowing I had to go tot bed for work in the morning......Ready to keep reading"
Black Wolf
"Werewolf+Criminal Drama=Bomb story🔥 I love the plot and how Eli tries to find a way to control himself and Nina tries to find out the murderer. Your descriptions are amazing, especially in the prologue and chapter 1! The details of the descriptions make it easy for the readers to picture everything in their mind! There are a few grammatical and vocabulary mistakes, but who cares when the story is intreguing and so addictive!! 😍😍 Keep up the good work!! I am looking forward to your updates!!💐"
interesting...
"so far i'm only on the 3rd chapter, but i feel like the rest will live up to everything. so this story is interesting and i like that the main characters know each other, usually, in a story like this, people will make it so one of them is new to the pack or something like that, but you made it different. and to be honest i hate the cliche stories when someone is new and other crap like that. I really appreciate that you made it different, good job. and about the text... when someone new is speaking make it in a new paragraph, please, it's sometimes vey confusing.... but overall i love the story, mostly because it's different from the others."
Black Wolf
"Hi, I'm the one that noted I haven't read a fantasy book in a long time, and that, I'm into romance novels. Your story grabbed my interest. Write on so I can read on."
Love this
"Love it. Always a sucker for the dream connection stuff so kudos for that and the wonderful image of running through the woods A+ for that. I feel like your characters are strong in the sens that you can believe they are real people you'd know, even though we hardly have any time with them. The plot is also very compelling and I'm curious where this will end up. Also enjoy the chemistry between Nina and Malcolm and the brother-sister relationship he has with Nina's sister. I always love it when a writer remembers that the main character has a family and have (what I'm assuming is a main love interest) interact with them. Now some criticism, sorry. You do the exact thing I use to do with dialogue, you write their dialogue the way it would be correct in; say a letter. However, you should remember that not everyone says things like, "Oh really? I am not even dressed properly!" It sounds a little robotic because not a lot of people say "I am." in a sentence like that, instead they'd contract the two words and say "I'm". Also verbal ticks or patterns that only one character uses can help differentiate two characters when they're talking. This is just a suggestion and something I love doing just so I can have snappy dialogue between two characters. An example is I have a two characters and you know when character A is speaking because she contracts words a lot or misses out t's at the end of words. Character B says his t's and pronounces things properly, This can be a nice way to show character personality's as well. Overall this was very enjoyable and I look forward to reading more."
Black Wolf
"Everything is so well described and the plot seems so interesting so far! Can't wait to read the next chapters! My only advice is check through as there were some grammar errors. Other than that it's a fantastic read!"
Something New
"I can't wait for people to read it.!! For me a good book is something that I want to devour in one sitting ,that makes me want to know what happens next and one which I can relate to. Lets start from the beginning,The cover is beautiful .The plot is something new and interesting that I haven't read before.Eli and Nina are the characters that I feel are alive and maybe living in some alternate world.Their everyday life brings us closer to their characters and make them more real.Author has done a great job in connecting the story line.It flows beautifully from one event to another.We are left guessing as to what will happen next and that right there is what works for me.Introducing the murder plot is very clever on the author's part because we can enjoy two genres in one story and that is really amazing, So all in all I would like everyone to give it a go and decide for yourself. For the author- My only suggestion is that please go through the chapters once you are done with them and do a quick revision of it so as to avoid any grammar or spelling mistakes that can offend or hinder the reading pleasure of some readers.The chapter length can also be altered.(maybe).That's it. Keep up the good work. :)"
