What is your opinion?
Interesting
"I really loved the idea of the story and it seems like you have a really good plot. Aside from a few grammar mistakes, it seems like the perfect read."
Loved!
"When I first read your intro it honestly didn’t catch my attention, but as I continued onward; I found the inauguration of your story to be cavernous, utterly philosophical. It was composed but heightened as she ran for her life. Though as I followed through the story, you took us even deeper into the life of your character as well as adding others. I absolutely loved that! I felt as though, by adding them it broadened our/my curiosity as to what she is, or possibly could be. I honestly can’t wait to read on and actually find, as to what she might be hiding not only from others but herself included! "
Interesting!
"I always loooove being put on my toes by diving into a new world like this! I've only gotten freshly introduced but I want answers! As for the few typos, I dont even care, I just want Callie to be happy & safe!!"
Discoveries
"Wonderful writing!! Your words flow beautifully and draw me into the story immediately. I love the intimate details you provide, the alternating POV's and the rich descriptions that enfold the reader. Very well done! You got me hooked.. :) and I am looking forward to seeing how this story unfolds and where it takes me."
Intriguing
"I was hooked by the first few paragraphs and as the chase went on and the eventual end to the chapter with our character fading to darkness, I couldn't help but turn the page! I haven't gotten too far yet, but the plot is captivating, the grammar is excellent and the writing style is just beautiful! I love the before and after type of chapters set up here, it really is helpful toward the reader and helping us figure out what in the world happened!"
Intrigue
"I followed each line and felt the story from the beginning as you wrote each line it felt great to go on to a few more lines in Discoveries. A well-focused story and with a few errors but you have brought to us readers a fair amount of talent. As the story goes on I would like to read more chapters."
Discoveries
"Honestly, the title didn't catch my attention. It was like another boring story of story-telling bla-bla-bla. But, no it isn't! I thought I will stop reading until those flying "arrows" in the first part and the struggle of the character to escape from something or whatever got my interest. This is something amazing that I want to read more. Especially that this kind of genre is my preference. Continue updating this one. Surely, it'll catch more readers. Keep it up!"




