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Showing you love

"A must read! I really really and i mean really liked this book!! Thank you so much author!!"

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So good!

"Holy character development, Batman! Honestly Ivy was a hard to like main character for the first few chapters. As it progressed and as you see the reasons why she is they way she is.. it all made sense. And to her point, if it was a male character he would have been celebrated and loved. Amazing job pointing out that double standard. I loved the slow progression of their relationship and the end was the perfect sort of closure. Very well done! "

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To show you love

"Lovely is what I will say and I haven't even finished it yet😂 every chapter I Say to myself "and the plot thickens""

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Wow

"It's so good! Please please take your time to read this book!!"

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Ivy and Pierce

"Very heartwarming and realistic. I enjoyed Pierce and his mortal, Ivy, falling in love together. I love Ivy's character. She is like many if us... holding a grudge. Author is talented and very Creative. Original Idea. Who would have thought of a story like this.😀😀😀"

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Good

"Very good story. Strong female char with a lot of baggage, fittingly the God of love helped her open her heart and find her true self. Well done! "

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Fascinating♥️

"Was searching for some good story to read when J stumbled on this one And to be very honest it was best thing happened to me today kept my mood light. I really fell in love with this novel its plot it was so relatable and amazing to read especially the Character development 🥺♥️ Good job . I think you really done great in writing what you thought and wanted to ✨🤩"

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One of the best books I read on this app

"It was a journey from the start to the last dot. I fell in love, I hated, I hated some more, then forgave, and again. I cried and laughed and smiled and what not. I wish I could read some more stories like this. Congratulations to the writer, it really is great! "

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Showing you love

"I love the whole concept of the book, and the touch of realism put into. It's one of the few books I would reread. "

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Different

"When I first started reading this novel, I wasn’t sure if it was right for me. However, as I continued reading I realized how unique and deep felt this book was. It evokes so many different emotions: love, hatred, anger, frustration, and sadness which made me feel a deeper connection with the story."

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I freaking choked

"The book is so good, theres many emotions you will feel strongly and believe me you will choke on your emotions like drowning. The main character is so strong and I wouldn't ever be disturbed by her , because her life was so sad. By the way I loved their chemistry with Pierce~"

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I couldn't stop smiling.

"It has been a long time since I have fallen in love with a protagonist. I simply adore Ivy! I love your pictorial writing style in which you can explicitly envision what you are writing without being excessive and complex but its cohesively written and allows a reader to flow though the story and journey with the characters. Keep up the amazing work!"

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Amazing

"This is a very nice, different story of Cupid coming to Earth. I enjoyed this because the characters felt real. The storyline is well written. I liked your easy narrative and natural dialogue. There were so many things about this story that were interesting and wonderful. I'm waiting for the rest."

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Showing you love

"I love the idea of this book. It's really giving a different perspective to love and I absolutely love it! I understand Eve's issues with love as her trust is broken. Eve is such a perfectly flawed character. The short paragraphs makes the suspense build up I like that you made it that way. Also, the characters at the beginning of the story has a stiff dialogue, like "I am" and don't put this to heart but if you had put "I'm" it'd make the story flow better. If not and you meant it to emphasize the word, you should consider writing them in italic. So far, I love the story. It's new and gives out the idealistic aura of such realistic person. I'd recommend these to romance readers that needed a new perspective on love. Keep writing!!"

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"This was such a refreshing story to read! I consider myself an avid reader of books and I don't think I've ever read a story like this one! The characterization of Cupid to me is spot on and is interesting. I've never thought about what cupid might look like if he was human but after reading this I feel that his description is on point! The only critique I have is on the main character. I love her and I see that you were writing her to make her strong and able to defend herself, which is refreshing to read the main character strong for herself and wanting to prove people wrong. My only thing about it is that I think she's a little too strong if that makes sense. She comes across as, excuse my language, but a bitch and not in a good way. It almost turns the reader away because of how abrasive she seems to be at almost everything. I'm not saying you have to change her character, but give her some sort of "softness" that readers can see within her that makes her seem a little less harsh. Other than that, I loved this story! Once again, it was a refreshing read and I'm glad I came across you and this read in the forums :)"

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Excellent Read

"I don't usually read this genre of stories but I loved this. Your paragraphs are a great length which makes it very smooth to read. Your descriptions are brilliant and put me right in the scene. When reading I felt like I was in the story seeing it through her eyes. The idea of cupid is amazing. Well done and I look forward to seeing where this goes!"

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Excellent!

"The plot is well thought out, and the story is very engaging. The writers style keeps the reader engaged. I can’t put it down. It’s rare I find something I just can’t stop reading. The part of the main character challenging a god is very compelling. The writer paints a clear picture of the world they have created. Other than a few errors with some wording which is not to distracting the writing flows very well. Great story so far. Thank you for sharing."

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Showing you love

"So far, the plot is interesting and doesn't give too much away at the get-go, which creates a great hook. There's so much happening that we're only seeing bits and pieces of, and I'm excited to see how this goes"

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Great start!

"I enjoyed the premise for this book, the idea of Cupid coming to earth has a lot of potential for romance and comedy. I like that the MC is flawed and imperfect, but watch out for making her too abrasive. She needs at least one "redeeming" factor (i.e. she loves animals, she's good at music, she helps someone when they fall down) just one small thing that lets us know that she is going to grow and change over the course of the book. Overall, great start and I look forward to reading the rest!"

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"Omg, I love this retelling! There's only a few chapter up so far, but I'm really enjoying it. I like the flawed MC, and the original spin on the genre. Keep it up! "

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