What is your opinion?
Sing ganda ng author
"This book is good to read by many readers. The interaction is good but visual is very short"
Ready-to-Publish RPG Story
"I have to admit that this kind of fantasy is not my cup of tea, but the mystery and the characters you created managed to make me interested until the end. I also have to give you thumbs up for the world you created. The magic, the kingdoms, the creatures, the spells... Everything deserves a publication. I like the chemistry between Ana & Erkalla, Marick & Rowen, also somehow Ana & Rowen. As someone who rates stories based on chemistry, I'd say that I could feel it in your story. You didn't write the many details about the characters' appearance. I wonder if you wanted the readers to make their version of the characters. If not, I think some descriptions about the characters' physical appearance & what they were wearing would be good. From the early chapters, I instantly remembered the RPGs I had played in the past. I could even imagine which part would be a mission, which part would be a boss battle, etc.. It was actually a fun read! I did feel that sometimes the problems were solved in such a short time, but I think this is very good if you wrote this story for children or teenagers. For older readers, the inner conflicts might have been too simple. For example, when someone died, the closest friend might have felt he sorrow for some time, but you made this friend so strong and seemed fine after one single cry. The language you used was simple and it made the book easy to read, even for foreigners and younger readers. I also like the relatively short chapters. I found one mistake between chapter 21 - 23. You wrote 'Erkalla', but I thought that one should have been 'Ennana'. You might want to check that one. I didn't expect that the mystery would be hidden until the end of the book, although I did realize that this was only the first book. I didn't expect the "happy" ending, though. Anyway, I hope this helps ;) Keep writing! Regards, Kei Angelus"
An intriguing read
"I'm not much of a fantasy reader, but The Mage Queen's premise and writing style are quite refreshing to witness. No abstract wording here, it's an interesting blend of your usual fantasy tropes with modern sentiments. Looking forward to more of what the author has to offer!"
Compelling!!
"I'm in love with your writing and the pace your story goes in. I find myself wanting to read more and more and intrigued to know what happens next. I must say you have unique and creative names that make the book all the more interesting as well as that I did not see any flaws in the story, you totally deserve these stars, keep it up!!"
Love the book cover
"This novel was awesome. It was captivating and also a page-turner. It's error-free (at least I think so). Plus I love the first chapter the most---it was the one which made me want to read on. Additionally, I love the beautiful book cover! I'm definitely going to read book 2 when I have the time. I love all the plots, characterisation of the characters, as well as, the storyline. No readers would want to miss this book!"
Mage Queen
"This is a solid piece of work! I guess this should be in every fiction archive "
Excellent!
"First time, I am saying this to anyone. You can even look at the hundred reviews I have on my profile and only yours I can say, has a proficient writing structure. One authored like a published book. It mirrors the works of professional writers and I am truly impressed at the cohesion between the protagonist's thoughts and realizations that flows with the pace of the story. Writing is pictorial, so I was able to visualize everything you were writing so it was so much easier to immerse myself into the word you have recreated. LONG LIVE THE MAGE QUEEN"
