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A Game of Hide and Seek

"Congratulations on your 2nd place win in the Mystery/Thriller genre of the Coalition awards. This is a fast paced detective story, in which our hero is in pursuit of a serial killer. The plot twists and turns as he tries to gather clues and in between his relationships with his fiance and his friends and co-workers are explored. Technically, this story needs a good edit with an eye to correcting grammar and punctuation, but the problems do not detract from an excellent who done it."

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A game of hide and seek

"Great read, interesting plot! Descriptions were good, overall a very interesting read. No spoilers, would definitely recommend to those who love a good amount of crime and twist in a book! Author has done well! "

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Hope He Never Finds You ...

" He knows how to seek and he is very skilled at hiding. He knows how to blend in among the ordinary people, despite his large, muscular frame. He uses his good looks to appear harmless to the unsavvy. Deadliest of all, he knows how to find the right shadows to shroud himself with, never revealing his dangerous presence until it’s much too late. John and Carol the two detectives assigned to the case do their best to track this killer. But he always seems to be one step ahead of them. Mocking them even with a murder performed right in front of the medical examiner’s home. Will the Hide and Seek killer ever be found and forced to endure justice? Very good plot. I liked the side story of the romance between the two detectives. There’s a nice diversity in this novel as well. Be prepared though. It’s quite an intense read. "

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Strong start!!

"You're such a great writer, I feel like you've got everything down to perfection, the characters are great, the descriptions are awesome and the plot is thick!! I'm excited to see where this will go! Keep writing! Much love, Coffee"

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A Game of Hide and Seek

"I’m kind of lost. There is too much back and forth between the police that I can’t follow who’s who and who’s with whom. "

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Interasting!

"Interesting book overall with interesting features. Interasting read! "

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Way to go!

"What a great head start man. Keep working hard and soon you will reach the heights of sucess."

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Same title is perfect

"The story is really good but there are many errors it needs some editing "

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Neat

"This is a good beginning for a good crime novel. Keep up the good work"

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