Inkitt
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An intriguing read

"It was mainly the attention to detail that drew me in with this story, I soon realised that it also had a lovely plot and some very interesting characters!"

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Charming!

"Loved the writing style. The narrator was likeable, the storyline was intriguing and the ending satisfying. You definitely have a way with words and I'd love to read more from this pair! You can never con an honest John eh ;)"

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Amazing

"I really like your layout when writing your book. It makes it easier to read. And I really like the detail and the way you word it. Overall it’s a great book "

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A Lovely School for Ugly PIckpockets

"Very well executed.. I really enjoyed the authenticity of the language and was happy that it wasn't over done."

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Amazing!

"I love the plot in the story and how relatable I felt to some characters! Knowing myself, I have to read a book with a lot of detail so that I can feel really into the book, and you rocked it! I love the detail you used, so please keep up all your hard work and keep writing!!"

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Communal Writer!

"I love this kind of writing where it feels like reader is with the characters, its not like the average storytelling but experiencing it firsthand, i loved the inclusivity of it, of how it is written and your taking us as the reader on a journey that you have authored. Nice job, a few technical errors but easy to remedy!"

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Really good!

"This was super good! I was addicted from beginning to end! And yes I want you to write the scene that was described! There was some awkward wording and punctuation, easy fix! But I really liked this! I don’t read a lot of “Bonnie and Clyde” type novels, so this was super different for me, but I loved it!"

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Based on one and half chapters.

"There is a lot of potential here but there is so much going on. 1) Who is telling the story? Who's POV is it? 2) You (the reader) are immediately thrown into a scene where you have to figure out what is going on but you have incredible descriptive details of what is around this person. 3) Dialogue is such a difficult thing, I battle with it too. Like I said your book has so much potential and you're amazing! You just need to tweak it here and there. Or just ignore what I've said cause it's literally just my opinion. Rock on x"

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