Inkitt
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Another Winner

"Ms.Abbot...has done it again a good yarn of literature and drink. Ms. Abbot does another great job. She knows how to tell a story and introduce characters that make you want more. The only bad thing about this story, is it had to end."

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Great Start

"I love everything there is to love about it. I like that is it so poetic. Amazing writing style. Good job keep it up!"

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I LOVE THIS

"Your imagination thrives in this book. So poetic, yet its not poems. I love the characters, especially Jackie. My mother in law's name is Jackie. The way you've structured the book reads like a diary without coming off as one. Great book!"

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Brilliant!

"I honestly loved this story to pieces! The author has done a fab job in creating a story that is lifelike, easily conjured in the mind and brings a smile the readers face. This story is both daring, exciting and truly well written! The shenanigans described are hilarious and I would heavily recommend this story to anyone looking for a read that is something different. This story has broken barriers in storytelling, both in the way the author introduces their characters and how the tale unfolds. I am very much looking forward to reading more from this author, this story was brilliant!"

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Very good story

"I really enjoyed the story and the author had an amazing style that was very unique. There was, however, quite a few grammatical and punctuation mistakes, but those can easily be fixed with a little editing. Overall, I thought the story was a very great read! Keep up the great work!"

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Smooth

"The aura of the narrative is smooth throughout the book and the character Brute is amusing. I like the description and the liveliness of the characters and yeah it's a fun read. A nice read indeed. :)"

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