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Different fun and sexy

"Overall a fun read"

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Captivating

"Very good plot line and easy to be pulled in to the story. Now that it's 2 in the morning I can finally sleep🤣 Great job to the author! I look forward to reading more of your work. "

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Captivating is the word!

"Just into the first chapter and I am already so captivated by it. Great work and loved your creative edge to everything! Keep going!!!!💕💕😃😃😃"

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amazing

"well written book and very captivating. english is not my first language and i like how simple yet entertaining the story.The grammar is ok spacing i think its from the apps fault, so far so good keep up the good work and i will continue on reading this book, Thanks for sharing your talent."

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All chapters are worth to wait..reading this novel the first time I see in other apps already caught my eyes..heart and mind...I love reading..and this lured is one of my favorite story so far...to the author...god bless you and more power...always supporting your story....❤❤❤❤❤❤

"I like all the chapters in this story...for the author...more blessing and power to create more interesting and exciting stories...this lured is one of my favorite story so far...always reread and I'm never got bored..always love this story....❤❤❤❤❤"

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Lured by the unknown king

"I love the whole of this book it's a story that draws you in with every single chapter and the creativity of the writing is amazing "

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LURED BY THE UNKNOWN KING

"I love the story it gives you a sence of reality and the mixed up world of Gods, Human, Unknown Creatures. Ohh don't forget the romance I love it keep it up. The spacing is still way off but other than that it's a good jampack story that once you read it it's hard to put it down. Well done dear author. "

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A rather captivating story

"Actually well thought out plot, amazing characters with some rather fun dialogue. A few grammar errors, but written in a second language explains that. I really enjoyed this! "

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Lured by the unknown king

"So excited to read for the next chapter.. can't wait 🤗🤗🤗"

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Really Good ")

"Okay so this book is really nice ") I like it and you have a good book going on here....") The plot of the story is good planned and it's easily explained and well thought of ") I don't have complains about your writing and it's really good ") your English are really good ") Okay there is a few errors I noticed...full stops and you start your next word straight unto the full stop..."X Oh and there is some errors on your words.... example (where words should be ---look----you said looked---- if you fix those small errors it will be perfect ") (like it already is "D) but your spacing in the story is easy to read ") You really have a great book here and I really like it---") This book really have potential and I will keep on reading...") Please don't take my review as a bad one because I am only here to help as a friend ") Keep writing and happy writing "D (I am not really into the whole ----- grab me and jump on me scene ----- but it's not so bad..."X) Alright happy writing "D"

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Marvelous a movie in the making!

"I don't know why but the moment I read this book not only I am drown with the story and how the author portray it's character's but I can also imagine like I am inside the story.This is a highly recommend story please don't stop. I saw your from Wattpad I am surprised of how many people you have in their and the story you made is slot just pity I can't read them here. I don't want to download new apps to follow up where your story goes . Little kitten possessive husband looks quite interesting and I'm in Love with the Demon Prince is eye catching. I hope you can put them here too. Grammar error is minimal and I don't give shit on that I love your profile saying you don't go by the books. Be unique many will like your personality."

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Love it

"Loved every minute of it "

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Loving it so far!

"I am not very far in this book however I love it so far! It has definitely grabbed my attention from the start and I can't wait to continue reading more. I love your writing style as well. Great job and keep writing on! I know I'll be waiting for the updates "

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Best

"I love the way she writes and she keeps me glued to each chapter in such a way that I don't feel like commenting until the whole Book is finished 🤞🤞😂"

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Stellar!!

"I am besotted with the way you have written a reflection of society and the unfair laws of misanthropy that was stellar and they way you write is so immersive it isn't too complex but no overly simplicity but it's this beautiful meld of both that absorbs a reader and allows for them to part of the world you are creating and the story you narrating. But first... Mr Charls though (frantically squirms in bed) I love Ria she's so relatable!"

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Great potential!

"So far it's good, I didn't notice any grammar errors, so that's a plus. The story line is good as well. "

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