What is your opinion?
Greeting And Appreciation Request!!
"Hi, I’m Aliana a professional comic, webtoon, and manga artist with a passion for cinematic storytelling. Your story has the perfect balance of emotion and intrigue that deserves to be visually brought to life. I specialize in expressive, high quality art that captures character depth and dynamic world building. Let’s turn your story into a stunning visual experience connect with me on Discord: Aliana_Jordan."
love it
"this book is so different i absolutely love it! i fell in love with the characters. the storyline is so interesting i cant wait to read more."
Awesome!
"This book is developing in a lovely manner! Will there be more? "
Crash and burn
"I love the book"
I LOVE IT!!
"I love it so much so far. The author seems to not update quickly though but I’ll try and wait for it. This Noval has great potential honestly ❤️"
Rademacher
"The guys are dicks"
I love it soo much
"I love this soo much. I think it has the potential to be amazing."
Great book
"So far the book is really interesting it definitely grabs your attention."
Great story line
"Very interesting storyline different from what I'm used to reading in werewolf genre. "
Wow
"The plot of this story is very good. The story is captivating and it's one that when you've reached the end, it's a sad feeling because you want more of it. The characters have their own unique personalities and you put so much detail that you start to feel for the characters. I love that it has action, mystery, and a little bit of romance thrown in, The emotion is really good and I feel that when you finish the story completely, it'll definitely be one to remember. Overall, fantastic story and I am really hyped up to find out what happens next. Keep up the good writing! :) -A.A"
Brilliant Read
"Excellent read, very well written characters and action. I have left some observations in comments so they really are not needed in a review. This is a powerfully engaging story with a lot of great elements and potential. Was not finished yet when I wrote this, but I see great things coming. I love the bit of mystery that is swirling around and it pulls one into wanting to read to the end ! Keep it up! "
Crash and Burn
"Wow! What an amazing story thus far. I was waiting for a few chapters before I leave my review and bog was it worth it. Amazing characters, great plot, interesting scenery really makes this a great read. The female characters are tough which I love, we need more stories like this. The fight scenes are well described. Absolutely fantastic book and I cannot wait for more! "
Awesome💜
"💚Personal opinions; With this being your first book, you quickly found your writing style. Theres a few instances you could separate the longer paragraphs. Very long paragraphs make it jumbled, but once you separate the paragraphs to individual thoughts, it helps the reader immerse themself deeper. 💚Reading experience; It's easy to read and quick paced. The fight scenes are exquisite, i have no problem seeing the motions, and the area around them. I absolutely love it. I believe you can take this book to a place of great potential. I love how you bring in different point of views. It helps widen out understanding as readers. There are a few forgotten letters or minor errors in the book. Nothing really hindering my reading, so thats a good sign. I always say in my reviews you aren't a machine and sometimes machines don't help you. So as long as you are the only one working on your book with zero college skills or a job in editing, don't fret about the little things. If the book gets picked up by someone, they will provide you a professional editor."
Overall stunning
"Truly a very unique plot and idea for this story. You have description of the physical things down pat however I would enjoy depth in emotions and thoughts in every point of view I think It would fix the comment I seen a couple times about how everything felt rushed. Your characters are fleeing and fighting and given the situation that’s what you want. I just feel that by adding those details your work would go from great and unique to an amazingly immersive story that would hook anyone line and sinker."
Hooked
"I find your story captivating. Your story is my type of story and I was hooked with the first chapter. I enjoyed your writing and can't wait for more"
A page-turner
"This is a really gripping plot line! I love the way the author writes, its pictorial and easy to immerse oneself into and I adore the new supernatural elements interleaved into, I feel as it was nicely done, there are few technical issues but their minor as the story and the execution over it overshadows it greatly, you have potential to be great writer, beyond inkitt. So keep on writing."
Can't wait for more
"The detail it great. There's no mistakes and the plot flows well, keeps your toes curled! Cannot wait for more. Love the work that's been presented already. Hope the next update is soon ❤❤"
Keep It Up!
"I kinda like the plot and you have a lot of descriptive input there which is what I somehow certainly lack in my books I guess. Hope to see more from you and keep it up! "
I felt like I was in the book
"I love how descriptive the author is, they really make you feel like you’re seeing and breathing in everything the main character is, even just from the first chapter. Having the two points of view is something I LOVE, so that was a huge plus for me. I do wish it would detail more about her and her sister’s life before with their dad as it says in the summery, maybe nightmares or something? But overall, enjoyed it very much."
Marvellous!
"It draws you in a single chapter! A badass female lead that knows how to give and take a punch. You will not regret it, when you sit down and take time to read this story. Authors writing is effortless and without a fault, just 7 chapters and you already want to beg for more! 🥺 Great job! "
