What is your opinion?
Strong Start!
"The start of the book is very strong and immerse! The writing is immaculate, the plot was fast and immediate which was really good, without any background at all, we go through this journey with her. I'm loving it already! A very gripping story with tons of supernatural ^^ Much love, Coffee."
The First Bite
"It was simply Amazing!!"
The First Bite
"This had great action - right out the gate to grasp the reader - which is so important when writing a short story. Great job! "
Wow!
"It honestly felt like I read an entire book in one chapter. The character development was very quick and descriptive. I really enjoyed the unique take on vampires that seemed to be added. Overall, I loved the story and really hope the author decides to turn it into a novella. Great job!"
Needs to be a "little" longer.
"I love the concept but you have a lot of tweaking to do on this one. You still have several grammar errors. Those aren't game stoppers but they do need to be addressed. Also, we need a little more of the fight with the werewolf. Right now it reads like a "damsel in distress" story. I would also suggest you revisit all of the times you tell us about how she is worried about losing her humanity. You should be able to convey that in one or two conversations. Right now it's like your beating us over the head with it. I'm not saying this shouldn't be a short story. But right now it's too short. All of that being said. I think it has the potential to be 5 stars but it needs work. And I will close by saying, "If you sucked. I wouldn't have commented." I love this story. You've done a wonderful job on it so far. :)"
Interesting
"Your writing skills are near flawless. Your grammar is great. I myself don't particularly take too much of a liking to werewolves and vampires to be honest. The plot itself was well developed and thought through. I did feel though that the vampire was sort of cliche. Try adding some more destinctiveness to the vampire, add some unique attributes to it also and I think this will make an interesting novella. Good job!"
It was A Strong Start!
"I enjoy this new story. Started off strong . Interested on what comes next for Neeba with her new powers . Keep it up! I definitely recommend this those who enjoy fantasy. Keep it up !"
