What is your opinion?
i saw her in the mirror
"i absolutely LOVED this bookand cannot wait for an update! so refreshing in the details, and it hooks you right from the start! well done!"
worth my time
"im glad the creator came to post this so i could read it"
Great chapter endings
"I hope you continue writing. Absolutely enjoyed each of your chapter endings."
Super thriller
"Thanks for the suggestion it's really good one...i liked the way you ended "
I saw her in the mirror
"It was fantastic. I really enjoyed it . Worth my time. It was a perfect mixture of suspense and horror, twists and turns. I loved it. U are very good at visual discriptions. I loved the ending.🥰"
I Saw Her In The Mirror
"A great short horror story, I must say. The book overall is very appetizing and unique to read while your writing style is beautifully crafted and precise. I was really hooked with your description style and how you presented every moment through first-person's point of view. The characters were easy to warm up with and every character had their distinct introductions at the beginning. It has excellent scary moments and the suspense throughout the story engaged me to crave for more chapters. As a reader, I really enjoyed a lot and liked the story. I must also add that the story though in overall has a great package, I, as a reader, think that the climax came a bit quickly and abruptly. I felt that there should have been more paragraph spacing as my eyes felt quite difficult to catch with those long single paragraph, but the storylines were good. I think there should have been more introduction about the antagonist since the protagonist was her sister and her father's denial about discussing the whole situation clearly, made me confused at the end. Also, some of the protagonist's actions were unclear as to how and why she felt an urge to use the keys. But other than that, I felt the story was well written and the descriptions too were executed very well. I loved your use of words and view about the whole situation. It was imaginative and truly great for a short story. The book is worthy of more readers and views and I hope that through these reviews, the author can learn and improve more. I hope that your upcoming books will have more success. Happy writing. Best of luck. XOXO ;)"
I saw her in the mirror
"I really loved the story. In some places I jumped. I couldn't stop reading it well done for the first book"
Mirror, Mirror on the Wall ...
" Samantha’s parents are happy at the prospect of an affordable vacation for their three unique children, happy Sam, awkward and solemn Sami and the oldest and wisest of the three Samantha. Indeed her parents can’t understand Samantha’s reluctance to visit the old fashioned cabin. But it has always been Samantha’s nature to question surprises. When she first discovers the mirror, a seemingly innocent piece of glass hanging in her parent’s bedroom, it only becomes a matter of time before Samantha learns that she is the keyhole through which evil can tear her entire family apart or remain locked safely away from doing harm. Can she ultimately control the forces in the mirror? There is much more, but to continue with my descriptions of the plot would be to ruin some of the nice surprises in the story. So I’ll stop here. Let it suffice to say that “Mirror” is well written and provides some genuine chills. This story reminded me of one of my favorite horror movies; Oculus. That’s quite an achievement. "
Wow
"I'm not into horror stories but your book has for me hooked. You have done an amazing job writing this story. Keep up the great work. "
Very Alluring!
"This piece was crafted stunningly. I loved that the story had me on edge the entire time, and I was actually spooked out by certain paranormal elements in some chapters. The writer paid just enough detail to emotions and surroundings. It was all really alluring for me. However, I'm not a huge fan of the story description, and I didn't fully understand the plotline, at times it was rather confusing especially the concept of the 'mirror'. Of course, this is merely my point of view as reader. Overall, it was a great read and I'd definitely recommend it to anyone interested in the horror genre. The writer is exceptionally talented! I wish the writer all the best. Stacey Martins."
Wow, I am speechless!
"I'm not a fan of horror, but this, I just have to read it!! Because I will feel like I'm missing out, you are very talented. The details feel so realistic, and vivid. I beg you to make more stories, I'm in awe! 🙏🏽"
Saw her in the mirror
"I am not much into horror genre, but your book got me hooked. I liked the pace of the story. I don't like reading stretched out stories with unwanted descriptions. I appreciate content more than the length and number of chapters. I couldn't keep the book down once I started with the read. Besides the usual editing glitches, it was a good read! I'll try to read your other stories too!❤❤"
Saw her in the Mirror
"The best thing about being a writer is that once one tells a story it is theirs, and once they are done with it and happy with it then that can be that! This story had a nice style, very imaginative plot and though not a lot of back and forth dialogue, some great characters.... As in most stories, there is always room for improvement, more character development, descriptions,tweak her and there... And not that I am saying this is the case here, for i did find it a good read down a path of horror, but I know that 5 years ago I wrote a story I was completely happy with, until I reread it a month ago and suddenly reading it fresh like that, found a new angle and began a rewrite. As a writer, I would be very proud and happy with this effort, and encourage anyone interested in a good horror genre read to give it a go! "
I saw her in the mirror
"I really liked the book , I think it had a good storyline to it and was enjoyable to read, would recommend to others!"
I saw her in the mirror
" - I loved this story. It's just awesome - I guess I would suggest this to my cousin sister bcoz she is big story lover and a great story writer as well - I live the story and I guess because the concept is really amazing"
Worth a shot !!
"It's a very interesting story...kinda good plot...I would suggest this book for ppl who love horror and mystery...it's a good story...yet I wanted to have this in a long version rather than this short version..and I really appreciate your work at certain situation ...well done...it's a book u can give a shot if you are a fan of horror..."
I saw her in the mirror
"I really enjoyed the creativity behind the plot. It's nice to see something a little different from typical short horror books :) good work Author 👍"
I saw her in the mirror
"The plot was a bit confusing. I think due to it being shorter there wasn’t enough time or space to flush out all the ideas. I liked where it was going and it abruptly stopped with very little explanation. Overall not bad! Just maybe some tweaks "
Very unique
"1. The names threw me off a bit, and made it feel like maybe it wasn't a story with a lot of thought put it, however, at the same time it made it super cute and unique 🙌👏👏 2. In all honesty, at first, I was thinking that this would not be a great story, I am very pleased that I continued reading and found that it was in fact, a great story ! 3. If you are looking for a short story, with quite an interesting plot, definitely give this a read. Well done, great work "
Falling Into the Mirror With You
"This wonderful lady has written quite the adventure/horror book. While there were many interesting curvatures in the book I feel as though the author could certainly add a lot of details into helping understand the origin of the mirror. It is assumed that the younger sister called it into summoning. But how? Did it appear through the wall, the floor, or appear in the air slowly to suck the family members in in a horridly horrific way? I feel like getting the main character to see more of these scenes versus just skipping to them is a sure way to improve your reader's grasp. A sure way to improve this book is to add some more descriptive scenes that really twist the readers hearts. I feel as though this book was well executed with good grammar and that was the only critique I had. Feel free to ask questions and thanks for the great read! Cheers, JC"
