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Phantom Genius

"Well written and so relatable when it comes to finding inspiration in unexpected places."

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Thank you for such an amazing story.

"It was an amazing story. I love the start. Even the blurb got me hooked. Very intriguing. I enjoyed every single moment reading this story"

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Please write it

"I just love the artistic piece I hope you will complete it soon"

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Mysterious and inspires that effort can unintentionally pay off

"Bigins with a mystery and leaves you trying to figure things out with the main character leading to a satisfying nice surprise. Short but good. Well done. It leaves room for a continuation and the title has plenty of potential to take the story to new heights."

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Intriguing

"I usually don't read one shots, but this one definitely caught my attention. It opened with a mystery, and that is definitely what kept me scrolling to figure out what was going on. You really did a good job showcasing the painter's story of success in so little words. I'd say there are a few grammar and punctuation issues, but this si so good!"

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Sad

"I would have loved to see more chapters on this, I absolutely love your writing style and your ideas are so amazing. I would have given this five stars but I feel like with one chapter it would be unfair, it is completely your right to want to use your talent however you'd like and write what you want, and you're a great writer writer so I will support you no matter the book, but I really would've liked more chapters on this story."

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Finish First, Then Post!

"I really enjoyed the blank canvas style, the intrigue you painted in your introductory chapter - just check the wording to ensure your writing flows. We all get "writers block" (tell me about it!), starting something novel with a blinding flash of inspiration. The worst feeling in the world is that "day after the night before feeling" - when you come back to Earth, and routine. My advice to you is take a break then come back to it when you're re-energized - you'll be amazed at what you can create. Your story has great potential, you do - so don't post something with an afterthought added indicating you might not finish. You deserve recognition, success - give us your full story to read - when you're ready and not before!"

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Phantom Dreams

"I made some comments already, Please go on with your story and finish, didn't expect it to be this short. I love to read more. Go on, good starting already!"

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Beautifully created!

"The plot was good. It was a little interesting...but then it was too short. Hope you write a series for this novel!"

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Phantom Dreams

"Interesting but you wanna deep deeper. Highlight the importance of the phantom dreams and explain its significance."

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