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Two Way Mirror Review

"Ingenious plot and a really Brilliant ride all together. I read with extremely focused interest, missed the clue staring me in the face, and was totally taken aback by the extremely well written ending! "

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"I wasn't expecting the change in the story and it was really amazing how you eased that dramatic change in. that was so unexpected. Well, it was unexpected to me. Also, Your choice of words really enhanced the scene and vision throughout the story. Which makes your story very hooking. I felt like I was in the interrogation room observing what was taking place. How The character was feeling. Your writing style needs no improvement. I believe this is as good as it gets."

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Brilliant and Edgy

"A great psychological thriller , I thought I was in a dark mirror episode. I could visualize it clearly in my mind from the great descriptive prose this author used "

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One of The Best

"The description of every detail is really really good. As a writer, sometimes I find it difficult to describe unreal experience and thoughts, but readers can even feel it in this story. I like how you build the main character's inner monologues. They were magical with unusual sentence patterns, but they were used at the right time. I love how the clues were written everywhere, but they were really well hid that I didn't notice it at first. Also, the revelation was enough to make me smile and cursed silently. Sometimes I got lost in the middle of long paragraphs, but I think it was just me having to re-read this story in a better environment. Anyway, I will add this to my public reading list, Great Short Stories. Well done! Regards, Kei Angelus"

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Wow, I have no words!

"This is amazing. The complexity and layering of this story is wonderful - I was sucked in and spat out in a haze of fear and adrenaline. Brilliant work - keep it up."

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Where is the sequel?!

"This is brilliant. I love the style, the eerie build-up and your characters are nuanced and terrifying. A beautifully horrible examination of the monsters which live inside all of us. Will you be doing more of this? Pretty please?"

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Spooky yet addictive

"This entire story flowed like a stream of consciousness, smooth. The structure sounded like a short horror movie with all those little sounds like those clap, clap, clap-clenched my heart. I am serious, you have an unique way to structure your story- different than any other writers, and once someone starts reading, it binds you till the end. You are doing a great job, my friend. Your writing is much more developed than us, I hope you get the spotlight soon. Happy writing! Just wow! You just got yourself a fan, hope to read more from you. Keep writing, pleaseee...."

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