What is your opinion?
Fabulous
"Always loved strong female leads, hoping to see her in some action. Would love a Pov of flashback from her brother's side. The hate he feels will really add a strong emotion to the book. Best Of Luck 👍."
Hooking!
"I love the premise and the characters. Your phrasing is enticing, and there are places throughout the story that are eloquent. The only thing is that your flow and grammar are a little off, but with a little editing this story could be fantastic. I am excited to see where this goes!"
Captive!
"Interesting, mysterious and captivate that's how I felt, some small grammatical mistakes but editing can fix it, also I'm amazed it's interesting will keep reading this. It's so dark! "
Disguise
"The plot is so intense and the description is so vivid. That is an amazing story. One thing that you could improve is the grammar. Some words need to be changed so that the sentences make sense. Also, the first chapter was a bit confusing with how many characters were introduced, I feel like I as a reader didn't get to know each character properly except the narrator and its gang. But overall the story is really good. Keep it up, author!"
Amazing!!!
"Wow I really like your book, it is too interesting to read. Please keep on updating. Give your best to complete your book."
Really intense!
"I really found this quite intense, and I loved how the strong character is a female. The first two chapters were a bit confusing, and I feel like there were too many characters introduced at once. Few grammar errors here and there, but no one is perfect, right? I'm sure you will improve. All though these type of stories aren't exactly my cup of tea, I found the plot quite alluring. Waiting for more! Never give up xx 💜💜"
Good read
"The plot was intense, n so it caught many readers. There were many grammatical errors but who doesn't have them. English is not your first language, right? Perhaps that's why you go wrong with grammar. I would suggest u to practice more deeper word play. Overall the book was good to read. Keep going.."
Intense
"Intense scenes with vivid descriptions. Syntax errors bothered the pace and the sudden introduction of multiple characters was a confusing point. Next chapters will have trouble keeping pace with these scenes."
