What is your opinion?
loved it
"really amazing 💜💜"
AMAZING BOOK!!!!!!!!!!
"This book is just AMAZING!! I absolutely love this book it's just amazing!! I love the plot. This book is and will forever be in my top #1 books favs. It's my favourite book that I have read along with another book on Inkitt!! The style of the author is really nice. I love how the main character is one person, but it seems like he's not. I am really really really excited to see how the book is going and how certain aspects will come into play. Overall I really love the writing style of your book!! The grammar can be improved, I suggest you use Grammarly as it tells you your mistakes and what to use instead of or how to fix your mistakes. Other than that this book is the meaning of PERFECTION!! Overall, I really enjoyed reading this book, and this is the type of book which I will read and read and read again and again and again, and will NEVER get bored of. (BTW plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss update soon!!)"
OML BEEYOOTEEFULL
"I swear when I first got inkitt this was the first book I saw and I saw it everyday until one day I decided to read it. But I was stupid I never checked the author of this book >:( But I really enjoyed it so much until I reconized the book but Im sorry I didnt comment on the chapter because every chapter I want to give it the same comment: ITS AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG This was the second time I read it and I really enjoyed it ^^ I love it!"
Nice
"Nice story I liked it very much"
SWEET!
"I love it! The characters! The setting oh the plot! Amazing I really want to see more of this book and the characters maybe add some spice in the next upcoming chapters :) Grammar errors? It doesn't matter not everyone is perfect! (I also have those problems as well haha) Keep using that talent of yours! Im honored for having read a book like yours! PS: Reviews and Comments on mine would be appreciated as well You ROCK! -Leslie H."
First time reading this kind of book... AMAZING!.... KEEP IT UP! 👍
"I JUST SAY KEEP WRITING KEEP IMPROVING AND KEEP GROWING................¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤👍👍👍👍👍"
Wow wow wow , I was looking for something like this , nice plot , keep it up 💕💕 you really tried in your grammars for someone like you
"I love reading mafia novels and I’ll recommend kupkake "
Pretty Good.
"My average review is 4 stars, because I loved the plot of the book, but I thought it moved very fast in some chapters and too slow in others. Otherwise, it was pretty amazing! Keep it up, and keep growing!"
Short and Sweet
"Although I have never seen a book with such introductions, I can say it’s pretty unique and I liked it :) There are a lot minor grammar issues. I suggest proofreading so it’ll make the overall story better. I liked how each sentence got to the point straight away. It was short, sweet, and forward. Great job!!"
Sweet!
"This book has a brilliant start and I really like V's character. However, there are quite a few grammatical errors, but that's nothing to worry about as it could be fixed with simple editing. You're doing great. Keep it up! "
Amazing!
"V being a bad boy is so interesting 😁💕. The plot is amazing and I really love it. There are some grammar mistakes there though. The story is amazing 💖. Keep up the good work "
Love it!
"This fanfic is really good! Even though I'm really into mafia-themed fanfics, I loved this one! I know English is not your first language, so grammar mistakes will be there, but there is always room for improvement! The only minor flaws are that you might want to check your work before submitting it, that way you can catch the spelling and capitalizing mistakes. My advice to you is to download Grammarly, it will help you a lot, even I use it, and I noticed a difference in my writing! Block out the negativity, shine with positivity, and never give up your writing! Love and support from your friend💜💜💜"
Interesting
"V being a badass is so surreal! 😱 anyway, I like the plot of this story it's nice and very much intriguing... Just a friendly advise try to use Grammarly keyboard it would help you to correct and improve your grammar. I'm using it too and it helps me a lot. Just keep on writing. 🥰"
Intreating
"Hey! How can you relate my innocent tae to a mafia man...how come my sweetheart V loves killing others.. Just kidding the concept and plot of the story was very nice...also the style of writing is good.. Jst the grammer mistake..other than that its a good work...."
Dangerous Tae
"A very interesting story, although i must say a lot of grammmatical mistakes, but it can get better. Creative author!"
