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Wonderful!

"This story has so many ups and downs and you get so drawn into it... I loved it! :D"

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Two realms

"I really loved the plot, i would definetely recommend this, i was tired at first but when i started reading this i felt like all my boredom ended. Amazing book to read"

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AMAZING

"I would recommend this book to anyone who loves fantasy. It is one of the best I've read and I can definitely see this on a bookshelf one day. The way you describe things is just very astonishing and leaves me wanting to see more. It is so well put together I can see it play out in front of me. Your writing skills will never fail to amaze me and I love the plot. Keep it up!"

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Between two realms

"This is one book that will surely grab your attention as the writer takes you on a rollercoaster ride of emotions that are beautifully conveyed by the clever use of writing style. Regardless of the fact that the story has just started, I have no doubt in my mind that it will continue to be an intresting read. Great work!❤"

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Amazing

"This was amazing. I loved the plots as well as the characterisation of characters in this story. I read it all at once as it was a page-turner. The storyline is unique and the summary was written well because it made readers want to read on instead of just adding the book to their reading list. I must applaud the author's creativity and talent for writing this awesome story. Five stars!"

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Amazing!

"This book is truly wonderful. Every paragraph is descriptive and creative. I can easily imagine everything going on in the book and can connect to each of the characters. I found no punctuation or grammar mistakes and the first chapter easily hooked me. The blurb was wonderful, making the reader want to read the book without giving away too much. However, personally, I thought the pacing was slightly on the slow side. I would've preferred some more action and less details. Also, I found that each of your paragraphs were quite long. I recommend you try shortening some of them. I also believe that you could try making a better cover. Although many people say, "Do not judge a book by its cover," the truth is, everyone does. The only way to differentiate your book from others is to create a unique and professional cover. There are many things you can use, like Canva, Adobe Spark, or Desygner, to create beautiful covers for free. I highly recommend you try one of them. Overall, this is a wonderful book and I would recommend anyone who enjoys a good fantasy novel to read this!"

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I love it!

"I absolutely love your story! I've only read the first chapter, but from what I can tell from what I've read, you really give the audience a clear picture of the character and their surroundings. There are a few grammatical errors, but other than that, I greatly enjoyed the chapter that I read."

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