What is your opinion?
Good read
"Must say overall story line is very nice. Plot is so intense that grabs readers attention. Every writer must have unique style of writing and I appreciate yours. As said by some eminent personalities, writers work is only when he/she pens it down, readers thought is his/her choice. Overall try research on more deeper word play. Awaiting for next update."
Dark
"Really good and flowy. It's easy to read and the descriptions are great.😊"
Interesting
"A solid flow, giving more into the depths of what life can be I suppose. Might be overthinking this. Anyhow, aside from a few grammatical errors. It flows pretty well. The words transitions the scene fluently, which complements the narrative. Giving off more of a grim feeling I can say."
Dark
"Not big fan of horror but this got me! The plot is wholesome 🖤 few grammatical errors but it’s really good!"
Good job
"I love your story. The chapters are a tas but long for me. Also considering I don't like horror I like this. "
Dark
"This is amazing l love everything about this book and I can't wait for another chapter"
Interesting
"Great story. There are some grammatical errors here and there but overall it's good. Keep it up!!"
Dark
"Multiple overuse of the main character's name instead of him or he or other male gender pronouns. Also, when you wrote "women" , it should've been "woman". Multiple grammar errors, and I don't really see a plot besides the doll. Also, you could use other words for the doll, like "small ceramic figure. It was still really enjoyable, and I'm waiting for the next update! :) @_OriginalSwiftie13_ "
Intriguing
"The story itself is intriguing and has good imagery. However, I would suggest that you cut down on repeating the main character's name and use more pronouns."
Dark
"The plot is interesting! This book will be so much greater after it is polished.🌷🥰"
Dark
"You have got an amazing plot!!!!! I loved it. I personally feel you have a lot of potential so I gave your writing style 3 which is actually 3.5 .Coming to grammar I am not good at it so I won't be able to give you better review on that. Overall, your story is amazing❣️❣️"
😮😲😲😍😍🥰😘.....
"The plot of the story is quite interesting, descriptive, and in detail.. A bit of typing and few grammatical issues are there. Other than that, it is a great work and surely worth waiting for. I can't wait to read where this story goes. Also, I have never felt this scared. It might be the fact that I'm easily scared. I am guessing how will I sleep at night. I will have to jump in mama's bed, I think....lol."
Dark
"I’m not usually a fan of horror, but this was pretty good. There were a few grammatical errors, but other than that it was very descriptive and detailed. I really liked it!"
Great work
"A great piece of art... I am not really into horror genre but I liked your work... Keep it up"
dark review
"hey its a good story and plot but a few grammar and spelling errors otherwise pretty good"
It has potential
"Great plot but there are quite afew grammar and spelling errors. And some thing a repeative so trying using different words for something's other than that it is a good story. Also very descriptive "
Now Hear Me Out...
"Let me explain. The story Dark by Silver_Specter is not a terrible start. They are getting their ideas on the page and sticking to a single plot and that is more than some of us can manage to do with frequent updates. However, having read the story in it's entirety thus far, I will say that the author has a way to go. Firstly, I am not going to harp on grammar and sentence structure. It needs to be fixed if you want people to continue reading and understanding your story. No debating. (I've already recommended HemmingwayApp.com, a great online source for self editing and the possibility of joining up with a beta-reader only for grammar.) The score is so low because, even in the later chapters after several reviews, the issue has not improved. Secondly, the main character could be much more interesting. He sleeps a lot, often opening chapters with him waking up. He narrates, sure, but its confusing exposition that doesn't really show him doing much of anything. He has bizarrely tranquil reactions to things that I feel regular people would be panicked, angry, or expressive over. He just goes with the flow of what is happening around him. The biggest criticism I've ever received was that my main character didn't do anything, but that they were an observer in their own life. Make Micheal do something, take back agency and control in his own life so that he's more than a lifeless narrator. If you can create an environment where the reader can root for an interesting main character and feel invested in a story where grammatical errors don't distract them from the overall plot, then there may be something strong left to work with. The overall concept of the story would be more interesting, and the plot twists more powerful, if I didn't have to read things more than once to make sense of them or if I felt more invested in the character's conflicts. Please, please take these recommendations in stride. Again, not all of us even get to the stage where we write down the thoughts we have and share them with others. My goal is not to condemn the author, but encourage them to make changes that will bring them new readers who will continue to read beyond the reviews."
Recommended read!
"Hi! Ok let me start by saying you have a great plot. It's descriptive and the characters are well developed, I've read the other reviews, and there's not much I can add. I would say that the writing style can be improved and the grammatical errors should be corrected. When it wasn't the greatest book for me (I'm not the biggest fan of horror but it's my opinion so it doesn't matter) I would totally recommend this to anyone who loves a good horror book!"
