What is your opinion?
Perfection
"I really like the way you take your time to describe actions and surroundings without word dumping. Each paragraphs makes me want to keep reading....in my opinion your book is a page turner. Even though im a very lazy reader my mind is forbidding me from skipping any lines because i want to be part of every moment. Seeing the amount of effort you put in your books just motivates me to work harder. Your writings are master pieces✌🏾"
A Reaper Keeper
"Maybe this isn't fair since I love all things Reaper but I enjoyed this more than I should of haha. The little things did it for me too, like how the Reaper would say the full name of the ones he needed or wanted to take ( Which other reaper lore writers fail to do and it pisses me off! ) Or how he speaks in a slight whisper, like how death would since it has no worries in the world. The only thing that was a tad, and I mean just a tad odd is how you put the title chapter in the space where you write. But that about as minor as it gets since I couldn't find any flaws. This is definitely one of my favorites on Inkitt. Good job :)"
Caught in a Web
"Intriguing and my way of reading a novel under a storm. I've just begun, but the chapters drove me here to give my full response on this story. It's rather interesting with how you've written the dying souls in the earlier chapters, before we were introduced directly to the the female protagonist, and I can say two words; emotional and connected. The Grimm Reaper has this charm that allured the readers and is by far rather charming, and almost innocent like, ironically, but that's the vibes I got in the initial chapters. I'm yet to delve deeper, but I loved reading it so far. Your grammar and structure has been steady and just the right pace. Keep writing! ;) - S.W."
Lovely short story
"As short as this book was, it didn’t felt rushed. Shows us a side of the reaper that was never explained before. Our biggest fear isn’t death but our own self. ****SPOILED ALERT!!!**** As much as I love this mystery of not knowing Chron’s pass. It does makes me wonder, will he ever remember or did he had a life before he was the grime reaper? What will his life with Roseline be? Will she grow old and he never age? It’s a little sad but at the same time it is the way of life. "
Poignant
"Absolutely stunning. Each chapter draws you in and you want to keep reading. It is a fantastic how the author shapes the story, but you still feel like its a mystical, mysterious unknown. I love the style of this piece and look forward to new chapter updates!"
Looking forward to the rest!
"As I commented, I really like the repetition in the story, which is not a typical thing. It gives your story a solid backbone and each time you deviate from it, you can feel the pressure of time as you wait for the bell to toll. I can't wait to see what happens with your MC, the concepts of friendship and love as well as the introduction of the evil elements. As far as editing/punctuation, just watch your use of commas. They are tricky buggers- missing in some places, used instead of periods in others (comma splice). Looking forward to the rest!"
The Reaper’s Love
"In this story, the Reaper is very flat, just as it should be. It does it’s job while constantly reminding itself to be basically soulless. Though, with the title, the reader comes to expect a change. The first chapters are slow, but not in a way that makes it boring. You get to really know the reaper in this story!"
Death becomes us.
"Overall an intriguing story. I have to say, I found the beginning prologue to be a bit purpley -overly dramatic, too many adjectives. But the rest of the story didn’t match the prologue’s tone and was an enjoyable read. The chapter on Alfred Pottinger was well written and compelling. It was interesting seeing how Charon in a sense becomes Alfred while reviewing his life, and all that Alfred experienced, we experience with Charon. Also I liked how you ignored the cliche of Charon’s becoming a fearsome deliverer of death. Instead he is kind and sympathetic towards the suffering of others. I’m normally a huge horror fan, so I wasn’t expect to like a gentle angel of death. But I did like the personality you gave Charon. That was nice. I saw no major grammar issues. Good job. "
Reapera love
"Not my cup of tea "
