Inkitt
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"This novel is quite thought-provoking. I love how every color describes something. You have done an amazing job. Keep up the great work.❤️"

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A lovely read

"The attention to detail throughout this story was fantastic, where each chapter title held a special significance within the page-turning plot. The characters were well-rounded as well, I look forward to reading more of your work."

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The Best Book I've Ever Read

"I rate four stars because there were a few grammar and punctuation errors, but in all seriousness, this book is the best book I've ever read. That's saying something. I'm a bookworm. Today, I created a new reading list. It is called favorites. This book is in that list. Keep this up. If and when this book is published, I will buy."

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Amazing

"It is so so good. You have so much potential. I love the characters, imagery, the importance and representation you gave to the colors. I love the fact that in every chapters we learn a little more about Maya and I really love the fact the fact that you've talk about self-harming. I love everything about it. I am really happy that you've include Holland too because he is yellow as you said which obviously represents the sunshine. I cannot tell you how much I liked it. Continue and please never stop cause we don't want to be deprive of your talent."

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Great

"I really loved this story. I wondered if it was inspired by 'The Yellow Wallpaper' and I really loved the themes of mental health. I also enjoyed your writing style. However, I did see quite a few technical errors which can be corrected when editing."

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