What is your opinion?
Him
"Brett needs to live alit and so it already he knows he wants to so just fucking do it"
HIM
"Definitely love this story. Can’t wait for more! "
Him Teacher student
"This is quiet complicated story, for a 17 year old girl that live with his dad, no mother to talk with in times of struggles. I love how the story plot going on, can't wait to find out how she handles it all."
Him teacher student
"Like it so far keep them comin keep up the good work thanks good so far "
Him
"Love this story. It drew you right in. You should finish this because it is amazing."
Fantastic
"I'm not normally into these types of books. But this one has ne sitting on the edge of my seat, I love it. Your writing skills are on point. I'm excited to read how this plot grows and the characters. "
Intrigued
"An interesting tale of romance, a story defying age limits. The story is pretty interesting and I feel for the young teenager with a crush that's unresponsive an shows no hope for the future, I'm intrigued to read more as the story grows. "
Him
"I NEED MORE UPDATES! sorry for the caps lol I'm being serious though this is the first time I have ever read a Teacher/Student book before and may I say its really good!! Well done with everything! You have a good talent for writing don't waste it! Keep writing! Best regards to you my friend ^^ -Leslie H."
HIM
"It's quite an interesting story. Would recommend it to anymore. Can't wait for more. :)"
Dope
"Cute and interesting story. Keep it up! "
HIM
"I loving the plot and the way it's going just a little mistake that is keeping 'I' in caps. In many places you kept I in small letters as in 'i'. So thats the only mistake I found so just letting you know. I hope you don't mind. "
Teacher/student
"This story is dope. I love the author's writing style and the characters! Definitely recommending this to my friends. I can't wait for the next chapter!!"
Enjoyable
"So far, I'm really enjoying it! There are some issues with punctuation, but the story and plot are good. Can't wait to finish it. "
Him
"I am loving this so far! I can’t wait to see how the story is going to go!!!"
Hot for Teacher!
" Poor Eva. Not only does she struggle to perform well in school, but she just met her new history teacher. Or to be more precise she learns that her teacher is the good looking Bret Davis, a man she has known since childhood and is also a good friend of her father’s. But Eva is no longer a child. She has blossomed into an attractive teenager. As each of them become aware of their growing physical attraction to one another, the sexual tension deepens. You know someone is about to succumb to their forbidden attraction and the result ultimately will destroy one of them ...or possibly both. The plot is one of those ‘forbidden fruit’ stories that can be a lot of fun to read. The author will have to take great care however not to let this become an accidental support for pedophile type behavior. (For that very reason many authors use the female teacher/male student hook-up and even that has to be handled delicately.) So far the author seems up to the challenge. A fun, naughty read. "
Brett!
"Interesting opening chapter but needs a bit of polishing : You always need a punctuation mark inside the closing quotation mark of quoted speech.: “Hello,” she said. “Goodbye.” She walked out of the room. The words ‘I’ is always capitalised. I don’t find some of your dialogue convincing. Either read it out loud or get an app to read your stuff back to you. But keep going."
Very good
"Wow. Wonder why he’s acting like that?? "
