What is your opinion?
Potential
"Great story just some editing, speially in the summary. Angle to angel. Overall Like the story nice, the story structure would need a bot of fix, I advice to use a editing ap or help. Any question im open to help you. Keep up the good work and it was lovely. Sorry it took me a whiile!!"
Great so far
"I started reading it and hell... Can't stop myself from reading more and more Few grammatical errors but doesn't ruin it.. Loved it so so so much Keep on the hard work💕💕😍"
intriguing
"it is very intriguing, i am HOOKED"
brxndon
"bbg, this is awesome! just a few errors but ain nobody perfect! this is going in my reading list 'cuz why tf not?! keep up the good work ♡ ~brxn out"
Interesting...
"I really like the girls character.. She is strong , sarcastic and really awesome... Very interesting story... Will love to read more of your work in future..."
Review
"I find it very sexual but it's actually nice. I just skipped the part that has the—you know what. Anyways, keep writing. Love lots. "
Love + Lust
"To stick with the previous reviewers: Well written for a young girl! Slow pace but intriguing enough to keep reading. Very curious where this is going. Keep up the good work !! 🧡"
Amazing book
"Oh god your story is killing me...!! I just can’t help but think about what will come next Mane etli gami gayi che ke mari story nu chodine tari story na vicharo ave che. Just work a little on your grammar But i am hooked to it ❣️❣️❣️ Love your work ❤️❤️!!!!"
Great story
"This story is really good and I love the story line. But all you need to do is just the grammar. But overall, neat story."
Nice
"You have a simple and powerful story. You have presented the story beautifully and I hope to read more of your work. Little work on grammar"
Need improvement
"Your writhing style is good but u r lacking in grammer so u have to improve your language skills because of your grammer your story will not get what u want so u should improve i can understand your situation because for me also english is second language and i have been through this so to improve your english u read newspaper and physical books because for writing a book u need proper grammer so u can improve your english by these ways and i wish u all the very best for your book to reach the top and to come out the way u want .< 33333"
My pov
"This plot line is amazing. It's a good experience to read the book. I felt amazed. But, there is an issue where author need to focus is grammar. Not a big problem, a minor issue. I am facing it too. Overall, good book 👍 "
A Good Start
"The chapter is a good start to the story. However, I felt that it was rushed. I didn't really catch on to the main character's relationship with her parents before they left, so I would like to see more of that in future chapters. Other than that, it's an excellent read."
Genuine Potential
"So it took me some time to review ur book (sorry was busy!) but babe the plot was wonderful. The story has a lot of potential but the grammar is a big problem. A real speedbreaker in my opinion if you want to get known more. In the first line of the blurb itself the spelling of angel is written off as angle which dulls down the sparkle. Try editing or showing it some editor (even i could edit it for u). I love Andrew and how brave Stella is. The story is beautiful and would really do well if you correct the errors. Do not get offended or hate me for the pep talk i just gave but as a well wisher and a genuinely intrigued person i thought of saying it to u. I enjoyed the story and send u lot's of prayers for ur good luck for progress and popularity of ur book. Also if u don't mind try adding a cover to ur story, a hack which gains more readers [if u don't mind allow me to make u one? i could send through email or any other site u want. i wanted to do this as fanart) Love, sruthi 💖💖"
Very Intriguing
"Your work is very interesting and it has caught my stomach in knots. Already reading further, un-put-down-able! I really like it! You need to improvise your grammer, somehow. But, other than that your work is outstanding!"
Great plot, needs a bit of work!
"I think you're doing really well with the characters and settings, but the story line is a bit forced, the dialogues don't seem very natural and there are various spelling and grammar errors. If you fix those things, it'll completely boost your story!! But great beginning for you! You just need to keep improving! Much love, Coffee."
Love + Lust
"The story I read by far is good, with great plot and storyline. This is my honest review, hope you will take it as an aid for your writing. Drawbacks: => The grammar of the book needs to be sorted out. Reading it out wrong just breaks your link with the story. At many places, the emotions you tried to convey were totally altered because of these small mistakes. =>The story is a bit rushed. Andrew sending his people after the first meeting to kidnap her because she talked to him rudely is a bit overboard. That seems pretty unlikely to happen or to even think so try and keep it as realistic and believable as you can. => Try and describe the surroundings of the place where the scene takes place. Imagining the characters and places by reading is the only way to connect with the story so give something that readers can connect to. => Some necessary working on dialogues is recommended. The story has good potential to grow and get readers hooked."
A great story!
"The author has worked on the characters beautifully. The story is amazing and has great potential. Except for some grammar mistakes here and there, this book is a must read! I'd recommend this to anyone and everyone who loves romantic novels. Way to go Aayushi ❤️😘"
Enthusiastic Start
"You have an amazing talent which you need to polish even further to get to the gem. Stay strong with the flow and never get demotivated! Try to flourish more of the character traits and the grammars need more tuning so the story has a rigid base; try exploring more areas and look into it deeper to engage readers further. You've got some potential energy within and I'm curious to see how it goes. Keep us getting hooked! - S.W."
Great Potential
"The book is very engaging and is a fun read. It has a fresh take, which captivates the reader. The book has great potential. All the best :)"
