What is your opinion?
The unfolding Mystery
"A breath taking cliffhanger! I recommend this book to all the Horror lovers and a must read. A page turner with suspense and horror at it's best. Being a horror fan and a writer as well I really enjoyed the read and a big salute to 🙌❤️ u dear. Keep on with your good work and I expect many more from you!All the best"
Nice!
"Nicely written and I learned about places I had never heard of before. This story is a nicely peek into a different culture using fiction and prose. "
Best Book Award🏆
"This book was very thrilling yet amazing I didn't add it to my reading list for no reason😆 Absolutely 💯"
THE STORY WAS AMAZING
"THE STORY WAS REALLY AWESOME, I LOVED IT, A GOOD AUTHOR .WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER."
Good start
"I enjoyed the plot but there were a lot of grammar and punctuation errors that were not easily ignored. Moving aside from that you did amazing on the show don't tell method! I could picture everything that was happening to the MC."
Great, but...
"I do want to start off with the positives for this story. I like the simplicity of language used throughout. It was not complex, yet also not too dull. It was enough for you to read without stopping in between words or sentences. Next, I love the descriptions the author used when she talked about a scene or feeling. She had no problems painting a picture for those to see exactly what she was trying to express. With that being said, I now have to be critical and relay what I found in negative aspects. There are massive problems with this novel's structure. Punctuations are misplaced quite frequently, sentence fragments are abundant and paragraph/dialogue set up is not established well. I won't go into detail's exactly of what I found as I already did this in some of the author's chapters to give them the idea of what was found. Now, I do not fully blame the author for these mistakes. I know how hard it is to write, be your own editor and so on and so forth. Who I blame and are severely disappointed in, is the 7 other people below me who praised the author's work, but did not inform her of just how many mistakes were there. It is not like these were hidden or hard to spot. They were very prominent and if you actually read line by line, you'd see it in a heartbeat. These kinds of reviews sadden me because they tell me a few things. One, they didn't really read the story they just skimmed. Two, they did read it, but just didn't care to let the author know. Last, the author possibly did a review swap and might have given the others a positive rating which in turn, they also did. Whatever the case may be, stuff like this does not help a writer grow. If anything, it holds them back from reaching their true potential because only those who learn from such mistakes grow. I hope what I said helped you in the long wrong and that you continue to grow and improve on your writing journey!"
Nice book!
"The book at start was really amazing and made me hooked there which was further followed by thriller, I personally liked it 😊 Will be waiting for further updates ☺️"
Thrilling!
"When I first read, the introduction of the story. I could actually feel the blood rushing through my veins. I swear, my heart skipped a beat. What an amazing tell-tale! I need some tips from you girl! You maybe the best, I've read when it comes to thriller. I just one paragraph and you got me hook line and sinker!"
I love it
"The plot is awesome. I like the way story goes. It has some potential. The language is simple which make me read all the twelve chapters in one breath."
