What is your opinion?
Felicity
"Quite the beginning of the story. Very interesting and gripping."
Felicity not found...
"Great story, her ability is original and well developed. I would love another part!"
Original
"Its a very good story you have here. Felicity´s ability is interesting and original, I love it. The setting of a hostpital was a good choice, especially since we get the scene with the other interns, gives it a very real feel. There wasnt much plot for me to rate, so I´ll update as the story progresses, but what is so far is very good. Your writing style it great and has a nice flow, try more descriptions since that will give the world more dimension, especially since you have so much potential for nice visuals. Technical skills are great, I couldnt find anything, but I´m not a native english speaker so you might want to get someone else´s opinion as well. Keep it up and I will update my review as the story progresses."
review
"Hi, I like stories about the mind, probably because I'm studying psychology. This one has some good points, like the first chapter that draws you right in. I did experience a few problems though with the next chapters. The tenses mix present tense and past tense in a way that makes it difficult to read the story and the grammar is poor. The dialogue is snappy. and very well done."
