What is your opinion?
An interesting read
"Other than not making new paragraph when a person is talking, itβs a great read! "
Shards of Ice and Frost
"The grammar was impeccable! I love the detailed descriptions and would like to see more of this. It was a little confusing at times but I loved it."
Shards of Ice and Frost
"I just want to start of by saying the 3 chapters I read were beautiful. I have already read Scarlett's 'Deviant' and was entranced. I loved the plot line of this story and the characters are very well written. I have come across a few minor errors in grammatical points but they are easily fixed. Overall well done and I really hope the author continues writing, she's got some real talent."
A cool read
"The writing in and of itself is beautifully descriptive and poetic in its storytelling of fantasy , evil and love. Truly enjoying it so far."
Fabulous β€
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Mysterious
"I love the entire plot, how it is developed, and the intensity of each chapter. The very detailed yet mysterious character reveal of the Ice King and his relationship with Vivienne is fascinating, and I can't wait to see more of their dynamic."
Shards of Ice and Frost
"I love this style of writing, the poetic words. Even though I didn't quite understand the plot and what was happening, I really loved it and want to read more. The only thing I would recommend to change about is make it a little clearer to read. Overall, I loved this story so far! "
WOW
"I have never read a story with this much poerty written. At times i had to reread to undertsand its meaning. So a word of caution. For a person who is new to tge English language, or doesn't understand poetic themes, this story will be hard for them and they will over look it. Remember that if your audience in just English great speakers, this story is perfect. But for those who are learning English, you may need to use simple common words they understand to reach their heart with your story. Beautiful use of imagry when writing... great job."
Art!
"If I had to sum up what I've read so far in one word, it would be 'art'. I've only been able to read two chapters and already I feel captivated in this new freezing world that I do not want to leave! While reading this story I recommend curling up with a fluffy blanket and a warm cup of tear, because the beautiful descriptive words will make you feel like you are there with the ice queen. My only critique for the writer is that while reading I lost my place a few times because the length of the paragraphs being a bit too long, but that is the only problem I found. Overall, an amazing read."
Captivating
"This is an absolutely captivating novel full with delightful enigmas that I cannot wait to unearth!"
Stone Cold Beautiful
"As someone who adores Norwegian culture, I love how you've magnificently incorporated it into your novel. Shards is written with lethal elegance, and to me its like a highly coveted book of dark poetry- a book I will cherish."
Shards of Ice and Frost
"A beautifully written start! The way you describe things had me hooked right away and it's a really interesting start to the story! I can't wait to see what you'll come up with an where Shards of Ice and Frost will take me next. Very nice grammar and intriguing characters. The only thing i'd give a thought would be to maybe make the chapters a little longer, but that's completely your descision."
A wonderful start
"I greatly enjoy your writing style. Captivating, descriptive and proper pacing. It breaths life into the scenes and paints a clear vivid picture. The prologue is a fantastic introduction and also fascinates the reader to continue. I only wish that the chapters were perhaps slightly longer, but that is my own preference. I also liked the feeling of it being region specific. With SkolebrΓΈd and the setting it gives off an almost Norwegian region vibe. It is a terrific start and I can't wait to read more!"
Absolutely Amazing
"Amazing writing "
Amazing
"From your plotline to your writing style, everything is amazing. Your usage of vocabulary impressed me. Each character has a unique voice. I would like to read more updates on your book : )"
Truly mesmerising.. β€
"I have read only 3 chapters but I can tell its just mesmerising... You just held me there with your description.. I was really like the way you gave words to imagination..."
Interesting
"Going through your prologue it gave me the feeling of reading a dark poem or something like that, and that was actually kind of cool for me as I don't usually read things like that. Jumping into the middle of something like that can have its challenges of catching the readers attention and having them want more but I think the way you described parts of the scene make we want more. Now I don't know who your target audience is, whether this is a book for young adults or for older people, but while I was reading your prologue I stumbled on some words. These large and very high level words might give your book an air of sophistication to it and if this book targets a more scholarly crowd then it's perfect. But casual readers might turn away from this book because of the words and them not understanding them. Just something to think about and good luck."
intriguing
" I really liked the prologue. Your writing style is captivating... keep writing!"
