What is your opinion?
An interesting read
"Other than not making new paragraph when a person is talking, it’s a great read! "
Shards of Ice and Frost
"The grammar was impeccable! I love the detailed descriptions and would like to see more of this. It was a little confusing at times but I loved it."
Shards of Ice and Frost
"I just want to start of by saying the 3 chapters I read were beautiful. I have already read Scarlett's 'Deviant' and was entranced. I loved the plot line of this story and the characters are very well written. I have come across a few minor errors in grammatical points but they are easily fixed. Overall well done and I really hope the author continues writing, she's got some real talent."
A cool read
"The writing in and of itself is beautifully descriptive and poetic in its storytelling of fantasy , evil and love. Truly enjoying it so far."
Fabulous ❤
"ℍ𝕚 𝕊𝕔𝕒𝕣𝕝𝕖𝕥𝕥🤗🤗 𝕀𝕥'𝕤 𝕒 𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕪 𝕟𝕚𝕔𝕖 𝕟𝕠𝕧𝕖𝕝 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝕀 𝕚𝕥 𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕪 𝕞𝕦𝕔𝕙.... 𝔼𝕤𝕡𝕖𝕔𝕚𝕒𝕝𝕝𝕪 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕨𝕣𝕚𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕤𝕥𝕪𝕝𝕖...❤❤ 𝔸𝕔𝕥𝕦𝕒𝕝𝕝𝕪, 𝕨𝕙𝕖𝕟 𝕀 𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕕 𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕤, 𝕀 𝕗𝕖𝕝𝕥 𝕝𝕚𝕜𝕖 𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕕𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕓𝕠𝕠𝕜 𝕠𝕗 𝕒 𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕪 𝕗𝕒𝕞𝕠𝕦𝕤 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕡𝕣𝕠𝕗𝕖𝕤𝕤𝕚𝕠𝕟𝕒𝕝 𝕒𝕦𝕥𝕙𝕠𝕣..... 𝕐𝕠𝕦 𝕒𝕣𝕖 𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕝𝕝𝕪 𝕒 𝕘𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕥 𝕒𝕦𝕥𝕙𝕠𝕣 𝕊𝕔𝕒𝕣𝕝𝕖𝕥𝕥..... 𝔸𝕝𝕥𝕙𝕠𝕦𝕘𝕙 𝕤𝕠𝕞𝕖 𝕤𝕖𝕟𝕥𝕖𝕟𝕔𝕖𝕤 𝕒𝕣𝕖 𝕝𝕚𝕥𝕥𝕝𝕖 𝕔𝕠𝕞𝕡𝕝𝕚𝕔𝕒𝕥𝕖𝕕, 𝕀'𝕞 𝕚𝕟 𝕝𝕠𝕧𝕖 𝕨𝕚𝕥𝕙 𝕪𝕠𝕦𝕣 𝕨𝕣𝕚𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕤𝕥𝕪𝕝𝕖.... 𝔸𝕟𝕕 𝕀 𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕝𝕝𝕪 𝕝𝕠𝕧𝕖 𝕤𝕥𝕠𝕣𝕚𝕖𝕤 𝕒𝕓𝕠𝕦𝕥 𝕚𝕔𝕖, 𝕗𝕣𝕠𝕫𝕖𝕟, 𝕖𝕥𝕔.. 𝕋𝕙𝕚𝕤 𝕚𝕤 𝕠𝕟𝕖 𝕠𝕗 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕗𝕒𝕟𝕥𝕒𝕤𝕥𝕚𝕔 𝕤𝕥𝕠𝕣𝕚𝕖𝕤 𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕣 𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕕... 𝕂𝕖𝕖𝕡 𝕘𝕠𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕊𝕔𝕒𝕣𝕝𝕖𝕥𝕥... ❤ 𝕎𝕚𝕥𝕙 𝕝𝕠𝕧𝕖, ℕ𝕒𝕪𝕒𝕟𝕒💌💌💌"
Mysterious
"I love the entire plot, how it is developed, and the intensity of each chapter. The very detailed yet mysterious character reveal of the Ice King and his relationship with Vivienne is fascinating, and I can't wait to see more of their dynamic."
Shards of Ice and Frost
"I love this style of writing, the poetic words. Even though I didn't quite understand the plot and what was happening, I really loved it and want to read more. The only thing I would recommend to change about is make it a little clearer to read. Overall, I loved this story so far! "
WOW
"I have never read a story with this much poerty written. At times i had to reread to undertsand its meaning. So a word of caution. For a person who is new to tge English language, or doesn't understand poetic themes, this story will be hard for them and they will over look it. Remember that if your audience in just English great speakers, this story is perfect. But for those who are learning English, you may need to use simple common words they understand to reach their heart with your story. Beautiful use of imagry when writing... great job."
Art!
"If I had to sum up what I've read so far in one word, it would be 'art'. I've only been able to read two chapters and already I feel captivated in this new freezing world that I do not want to leave! While reading this story I recommend curling up with a fluffy blanket and a warm cup of tear, because the beautiful descriptive words will make you feel like you are there with the ice queen. My only critique for the writer is that while reading I lost my place a few times because the length of the paragraphs being a bit too long, but that is the only problem I found. Overall, an amazing read."
Captivating
"This is an absolutely captivating novel full with delightful enigmas that I cannot wait to unearth!"
Stone Cold Beautiful
"As someone who adores Norwegian culture, I love how you've magnificently incorporated it into your novel. Shards is written with lethal elegance, and to me its like a highly coveted book of dark poetry- a book I will cherish."
Shards of Ice and Frost
"A beautifully written start! The way you describe things had me hooked right away and it's a really interesting start to the story! I can't wait to see what you'll come up with an where Shards of Ice and Frost will take me next. Very nice grammar and intriguing characters. The only thing i'd give a thought would be to maybe make the chapters a little longer, but that's completely your descision."
A wonderful start
"I greatly enjoy your writing style. Captivating, descriptive and proper pacing. It breaths life into the scenes and paints a clear vivid picture. The prologue is a fantastic introduction and also fascinates the reader to continue. I only wish that the chapters were perhaps slightly longer, but that is my own preference. I also liked the feeling of it being region specific. With Skolebrød and the setting it gives off an almost Norwegian region vibe. It is a terrific start and I can't wait to read more!"
Absolutely Amazing
"Amazing writing "
Cracking start
"OMG! What an absolutely cracking start to a story! I'm definitely going to wait for updates on this one. Just one thing to look out for - the line breaks are in weird spots, mid-sentence which makes it very hard to read. If you can clean it up before publishing, that will be great. Overall, an amazing start and look forward to seeing how the plot unfolds."
Amazing
"From your plotline to your writing style, everything is amazing. Your usage of vocabulary impressed me. Each character has a unique voice. I would like to read more updates on your book : )"
Truly mesmerising.. ❤
"I have read only 3 chapters but I can tell its just mesmerising... You just held me there with your description.. I was really like the way you gave words to imagination..."
Interesting
"Going through your prologue it gave me the feeling of reading a dark poem or something like that, and that was actually kind of cool for me as I don't usually read things like that. Jumping into the middle of something like that can have its challenges of catching the readers attention and having them want more but I think the way you described parts of the scene make we want more. Now I don't know who your target audience is, whether this is a book for young adults or for older people, but while I was reading your prologue I stumbled on some words. These large and very high level words might give your book an air of sophistication to it and if this book targets a more scholarly crowd then it's perfect. But casual readers might turn away from this book because of the words and them not understanding them. Just something to think about and good luck."
intriguing
" I really liked the prologue. Your writing style is captivating... keep writing!"
