What is your opinion?
Wow
"This is wow! The beginning was slow at first but then comes the intensity, the suspense, the thrill and wow, it had me hooked! I love the dynamics of your characters, your use of wording and you bring out the suspense and intensity is incredible. Don't stop what you're doing! Keep this up! I look forward to reading more of your books."
Unpredictable: through the darkness
"Finally, I've finished reading this story. What can I say? This is brilliant. At first I was struggling to keep up, then I was washed off my feet with excitement and got the best of me. I couldn't comment because I was busy reading 😂 Now that there's a new book, I'll be there. Well done Allu, I'm proud of you. This book deserves a five star. And I recommend this story to everyone ❤️"
On Edge Of My Seat Reading!
"Was a bit hard to to get into it at first. But after a few chapters I was hooked. Had to know what happened next and before I knew it I was committed lol. Love it and I usualy don't enjoy suspense stories like this. But couldn't deny I enjoyed every bit of it. You did very good job at keeping pace and creating the scene. The drama the friendship and mystery is all very intriguing. Very well done my daughter loves books like this. I will for sure be finishing it and reccomend it as well. Kudos to you and keep it up"
Nice !!
"I really like the construction and theme of the story. The suspense is terrific and well maintained. It really does the charm. I truly loved the friendship bond of Ava and Gabrielle. ✨🌟 Your imagination and power to convey it to us is so good. Especially the action scenes. However there are few grammatical errors which can easily be fixed :) Good job ❤️❤️ "
Abraham
"I really liked your story! and I want you to continue writing and write new stories soon!!!!!!!"
Intriguing Storyline
"The Author has been able to keep the readers glued to the story, turning one page after another to satisfy their curiosity. The plot of this story is absolutely interesting. Not to mention how the characters were well-developed. This book is definitely highly recommended to young adult readers. I have been personally entertained by reading the first twenty chapters of this book and I can tell that this book is worth reading for. At first, I felt like I was reading a play script rather than a novel for its lack of details of the scenes in a narrative paragraphs. Instead, I could sort of understand and imagine everything through the characters' dialogues, which was still enjoyable. However, the author has been gradually adding more details, more narration in the later chapters which gave more insight into the story for the readers. I personally find the author's skill in writing, plotting out the story that involves loveable characters in this book, is magnificent. I wish you a good luck for your writing career."
Good read!
"The story starts off very differently, Like we are already in the story and want to know more. The amount of suspense in the story is just terrific! And makes the reader want to read more chapters, I really like how Ava and Gabrielle made friends very soon in LA, also the fact that they do not behave to them as outsiders but as family! There are a lot of mystery which makes the reader want to solve the riddle, and a lot of suspects, looking forward for more chapter. There are a little bit of grammatical errors but can be polished easily. All the best to the writer 👌🏻"
Amazing
"I like how you put the story together I hope to get more updates in the future also very sorry for not giving a review earlier I had been trying to read up to the latest chapter but this is a very good book to read, and I highly recommend it☺️."
Very nice
"I like your writing style. You have written the story naturally. I felt like I was living the moment while reading the story. It's a great work. You have created the characters really beautifully. They felt like real characters. I enjoyed reading the chapters. Although I haven't read the whole story so I can't say much but I enjoyed what I read. I'm not that good at writing. I'm also a learner so I can't point out much but I think you just need some work on the expressions, I mean, maybe you can make it more interesting. Well, please don't take it as a rude comment, I'm not that experienced or anything so I can't say much. Lastly, it was very nice to read the story. Thank you for recommending this to me. All the very very best for your upcoming chapters and stories. You nice, keep going. Take care and keep smiling. "
great book
"This is a very great book. I enjoyed it. It needs a little tweaking but I bet everybody will love it but my question is is it kid friendly? but I really enjoyed the book it is a five-star for me I hope everybody enjoys the book as much as I do as soon as I got into it I just fell in love with the book it is just amazing Aleena 94 do you have any questions post it on my wall it is at RMS Titanic 1912 thanks signed Steven Joseph Earl Lind/ therealjellyYT"
Extremely enjoyable
"I think it's an exciting story with a great writing style. The characters are amazing they are round characters as in you can see all sides of them from humour to deeper emotions. The way the story is written keeps me engaged and always coming back for more! I think maybe a little more description in terms of showing not telling and there are a few grammar issues here and there but I personally don't pay much attention to grammar as a reader so don't quote me on it, Other than that I loved the story and would definitely recommend it :)"
Wonderful atmosphere
"I love the atmosphere you present, it sort of reminds me of High school D&D not sure of what your actually going for! But regardless it’s great! Keep up the good work!! I would personally recommend this to anime horror lovers! As it seems to fit there demographic. "
Great story!
"I loved your story! The story line is powerful and mysterious. Just the plot and grammar needs a little editing then it'll be perfect. Keep it going! all the best"
Unpredictable through the darkness
"It's a really good story and has a great plot over-all. And every character here is beautifully portrayed. Looking forward for the updates and yes this story is Intriguing much."
Love it...
"This is an amazing work Aleen....It about friendship and I love it.....You've done a great job Aleen...Way to go....Don't stop writing....I'm looking forward to read more stories from you love.....The emotional parts got me though 😅😅....Overall it's a lovely book....Hats off to you....Good luck Aleen ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤"
Nice one
"Nice one, very good writing skills and so far so good storyline ... I love books about friendship... thanks for show me your work ...will get a full review when I finish it all "
Tactical
"The summary was straightforward and filled with a mysterious idea, though the concept of the plot is rather intriguing. The first chapter itself was rather alluring, but a strong start. I enjoyed the way your grammar and writing style just sorts of weaves themselves together. Keep it up! ;) - S.W."
Great story
"Nice story plot"
Out of this world🤗
"Wow! It felt like I was watching some teen series because I could picture it so well. This story would be a hit if it gets a good editor, and will be very popular. The way you bought out each sentence is tremendous and if you could just work on the dialogues more, it’d be great "
Mind blowing
"The art is gorgeous, and the content is good. I guess I should've known it'd be disappointing when Gabrielle had the toughest time in life...overall it’s good...excellent gift you have for writing keep up"
