What is your opinion?
It’s okay I would like more back story though although I am enjoying the plot, I want more info on Connor and Sophie’s back story and why they are living together there
"although I am enjoying the plot, I want more info on Connor and Sophie’s back story and why they are living together there "
Good read
"It a sweet read ,the way Connor is it's like he is obsessed with him "
I love it T_T
"Honestly, stories with lots of description in them really gives the readers an idea of what is happening versus them just guessing about how the characters look and what they are doing. It expands the creativity inside of them, well for me at least >///< you're doing an overall great job, keep up the good work!"
"Daddy's Girl"
"I really like the way this story is made, there is no other way I can explain it. Amazing story, love it! Keep writing!"
Daddys Girl
"I loved it! I fell in love with all the characters immediately. Though at the begging it was confusing because he told her to give him a _____ or get punished but later in the story after they simply kiss or when she asks to cuddle with him he was hesitant and he acted as if he could barely touch her. I don't know if that's the character development that you were going for but either way, the story was good."
Daddy's Girl
"Well I enjoyed the read but want more 😉 please keep updating so that we can find what cannor and sophia will decide 🌺"
Interesting start!
"(Ongoing, read til the end of chapter 10) This was a really interesting start! The author set up the relationship between the MCs well: Sophia seems very conflicted about her relationship with Connor, and rightly so - he doesn't come across as very nice at all, I do wonder what she sees in him. The changing POVs between the pair of them is very helpful for getting a sense of what both characters are thinking; Connor's perspective was especially interesting as it shows he does care about her, but there's something holding him back from really expressing himself in a heartfelt, loving way. The author has established the other characters very well. There's a genuine feeling of friendship between them all, with what their bantering dialogue and mannerisms, so the author did a good job in capturing that. Good job with this! :)"
Intriguing!
"I love how the story gives enough information to get a clear sense of what is going on in the protagonist's head, and still leaves it vague enough to wonder what's actually going on. The relationship between the characters is very intriguing!"
Daddy's Girl
"There's nothing to dislike of this amazing story. I love the characters and the way the story came out. The writer is amazing and really good. I love this story. I recommended anyone to read this story. I rated all 5 stars because she did perfectly on taking her time to write this amazing story for all of us to read. I just wish there was more chapters to read and longer pages to read. Anyways You did amazing on this story. 😍😍😊😊❤ "
Interesting
"It was good. But I would have loved to know everyones role at the start. But you are very good at keeping the story interesting. Good jo."
Wonderfully Amazing
"I love the characters they are all amazing in their own way. I cannot wait to find out more about the backstory behind the MC's relationship. Keep up the good work author!! -Sarah"
I love it
"It's a good yet confusing book. The title was a big attention grabber ❤ I dont know why I expected more but it's still an amazing book"
Love this
"It’s grate I really like it so far "
Daddy's Girl
"Interesting story, I have to say. It's different to what I have read. The story structure is good, the development also. But I would like to see how they got there. what is his problem and what makes him have those mood swings. I'm also curious to know more about her, I give this a five out of five becaus it has potential and is amazing. I love the pace. Wellk done author! Kudos to you! XX"
Amazing
"This is like no cap my favorite book ever! AAAAA i love it so much!"
Love it!!!!!
"Love it so far!! Can't wait for more!!!"
Daddy's Girl
"Though novels on Dom's and Sub's have never pulled my interest, I liked the story right from the start. You started right out of nowhere, creating curiosity and intrigue. Though there were a few grammatical errors, those can easily be fixed. Well done👏👏👏."
Daddy's girl
"Hey! I checked out your story. I really like how you started out. It DEFINITELY got my attention. If you feel up to it, you can contact me and I can give you a few grammar tips if you want. I'm a new writer myself. Okay if you checked out my new story too? Here's the link if you decide to. Dear Love, Burn it https://www.inkitt.com/stories/romance/619103 Oh and, I'm so excited to see what's gonna happen next! "
Brilliant
"One thing readers look often in a book is the writing style and the content..I really loved the content and the way the author narrated the story is just amazing! The narrator curved each line so well that the readers could picture each line..💜Keep up the good work! "
So talented
"I need more updates I was amazed just by reading the first chapter! Well done author I can't wait to see what more will be in this book. Overall continue writing and keep being you! Keep me updated! Best of luck! P.S if you could review my books too I would love that! Btw you rock! -Leslie H."
