What is your opinion?
Fantastic!
"This story is incredibly well written! The style is great, pulling you into the story with lots of details while still being easy to follow and with good flow. The characters are dynamic and distinct (Vicky is my favourite!) and the plot is well structured. Overall fantastic job! :) "
👏🏻
"I love this book because before reading this book I was never a fan of romantic books, but I did come across other good books on inkitt, and these type of books can be interesting too and this book pushed me more into reading and that I read everyday and without reading it feels like my day is incomplete and I love the author’s description , I mean it’s just amazing!❤️👏🏻💯...Looking forward for more chapters!🙌🏽...Cheers to the author 🥂 "
Great!
"The beginning of the book was amazing but after a while the text was sloppy and there was a lot of space in the chapters none the less I completely understand. I enjoyed the first few chapters were filled with amazing descriptions of the character for example, Maria’s eyes. I really loved it and that’s one point that’s stuck out for me. Also I would like to say that the storyline is amazing, for a beginning and for a few hours on creating each chapter it would be more better. I love it! Though, so please read!"
Interesting start
"I like the plot, it's fascinating and the characters seem to jump off the page. The paragraphs are a bit long but that can be fixed. There is quite often a time jump in the middle of a chapter. Whenever you need a time jump, might I suggest a new chapter? Your book seems to be overly descriptive. Description is important, but if there is too much description it takes away from the action of the story. Keep up the great work! Sofia"
Beautiful!!
"I love your descriptions!! The way you describe Maia is stunning. I wish I had your writing skills because you are going to be an incredible author someday. Although I am not finished, I have sent your book to my library so I can read it whenever. Keep up the good work!! 🖤🖤"
Ecstatic plot!
"This book is beautifully written out. I love the characters and the sweetness of the plot. Your writing style is wonderfully portrayed and I can’t wait to read more! There are a lot of grammar mistakes such as missing indents for dialogue, and thinker description that is italicized along with the thoughts. I think you should take the time to fix this as it weighs down the flow of the story. But other than that, I love where I am so far and it’s going great! Keep up the good work :)"
Never A ever after
"An amazing story, I liked it from start to finish."
This story is AWESOME!
"Hi! First of all, I have to congratulate the author on such well written prose. It is really refreshing to read a free story online that is as good grammatically as any published one. Second of all, the story is great! Although at the time I'm writing this review there are only 4 chapters, the story is really interesting and I honestly can't wait to find out what's next. It is exactly the type of story I like to read with complex characters and good prose. Well done author, keep doing exactly what you're doing!"
Really Great!
"I really enjoyed this story, the plot is good and the characters are interesting and I think there is just enough secrecy on what's going on to keep the reader interested but not too much that the reader is just flat out confused. Great job! My only criticism is that this story hits on one of my pet peeves when I see writing on here: Writing the whole story in italics. It hurts my soul a little bit whenever I see this because as a psych major one of the things we learn about in cog psych is linguistics and how people process and produce verbal and written language. Most of the meaning we get from words/sentences doesn't come from the semantics but instead comes from prosody (which is how we say the words like cadence, sarcasm, stressing certain words, tone, etc). Because of the nature of written language, a lot of the meaning when someone is reading something has to come from the semantics because you aren't speaking it, which is why italics can be extremely useful in providing the reader with an idea of what something means, especially in dialogue, beyond the semantics. For example, take the sentence: "I didn't steal the purse." If I italicize "I" versus italicizing "steal" those two sentences have entirely different meanings and interpretations; thus is the power of including prosody in writing; hence why I die a little when writers don't take that opportunity by italicizing everything. So that'd be my only advice is use the italics to add even more depth to your story! Beyond that, great job!"
A Must read story
"The story captivates reader's attention right from the very beginning. An amazing plot narrated in the most beautiful way. I loved every second of reading this book. It's a treat for readers who likes to read stories that are unique and thought-provoking. I am excited to know more about the protagonists and how this story unlayers. Keep it up! "
Amazing
"So I read all 6 chapters and you got me out here waiting for this next few. It's a good book, I like the way the story unfolds so far and I'm interested in getting to know more "
