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Birth of the free bird

"This was a sweet story wish it didnt end ,finch and the boys were great .I really enjoyed this alot ."

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Interesting

"This book is very interesting.At first i didnt understand the prologue but after reading i understood it.I love it and the way you describe Finch and the boys is really awesome. Welldone.Cant wait for the next chapter"

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Birth of The Free Bird

"This is very interesting book and it is narrated very beautifully 😍"

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OH NO! CLIFFHANGER!!!!

"This story BLEW MY MIND! What an adventure. The plot and pace was well maintained. I was literally sucked into a world of such imagination. You have definately earned yourself a new fan! WELL DONE!"

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Amazing story!!

"The author is a great writer while explaining everything that was going on in each paragraph. Even though I did not finish the story yet, it's already a amazing story!! It's beautiful and sad but I love beautiful and saddened stories. Highly recommend! 👍🌹"

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Please Read This Story

"Dont want to give away to much...but this is a good story with a lot of potential. The author does a great job of age of innocents meets reality. It seems to have a touch of the Lord of the Flies...but in a unique way you can not only get a feel for the characters...but see a reflection in your life. Please take a chance and read this story. Thank you."

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Great Story

"Loved this, I really loved the characters especially finch I thought the flow of everything was great and it was easy to follow. Look forward to reading more."

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Birth of a free bird review

"An excellent flowing story with unique characters that complete each other. I love the emotion behind it, the emotion of discovering the world as it is - real and full of unknown. The writer underlines the power inside us - the power to adapt to the real world. You will feel, live and suffer with the characters, brilliantly depicted by the writer. Good job 😊"

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"I love the premise of this story. It immerses the reader into its tale. These first 30pg made me want to know what happens next. I believe this book will appeal to readers of YA and mystery. A few oversights need editing, though. "

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Birth of The Free Bird

"At first I found this book extremely descriptive and that's really good, it's just that I wasn't really a fan of so much description, but I'm used to it now and I'm enjoying it. Really puts the image in the head. Keep it up, I'm loving it ❤️"

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Amazing

"Really enjoyed the descriptive language used in the book - it helps me visualise the story and escape into this fairytale world. Grammar and punctuation were on point. Keep up the good work! :) I have yet to finish the story, but after a few chapters, I'm already hooked! I can't wait to finish it soon! You should go read it now!!!"

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My review

"It's a great story. The plot is very different and interesting. I love it. Great work. 👏👏"

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Captivating Story

"I like the storyline and I'm curious to know what will happen if Finch leaves the forest. There are a few errors that need to be corrected if the author just reads through the work again. It's a great story for those who love adventure and mystery. "

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