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Great job

"This book is amazing it just has the problem I do.. No spacing between paragraphs... But don't worry the plot and your writing skills are amazing "

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Well written

"The book is written nicely. The beginning is very intriguing. I loved it. The story flows perfectly with lot of things going on. It is a simple plot yet becomes complicated with time. I loved it.. Overall; Well written mate -Sanu-"

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Lovely.

"The writing skills are on point, I haven’t read the entire thing but I’m really impressed by far. The plot is amazing too. Keep up the good work."

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A Love Which Was Never Meant To Be

"It's a great story to read when you are looking for something new. I never expected it to be as emotionally drawn out as it is though so that was a great surprise. The plot direction is really good, as well as writing style. The characters are also specified in a sense that they are all in seperate settings of feelings which was very dramatic and added more emotion to the story. Technical skills also very good and kudos to the author for that, the story includes many large names with complicated spelling so great job. Overall, it's a nice book and I woud recommend it to anyone. "

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Soulmate

"This was something new... I have been reading many books related to soulmates but this book had something which made me read till the end. Everything is perfect! Keep writing... "

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Very Nice!

"I’m really enjoying this book so far. Though I’m not completely finished with it I’m still enjoying it!"

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Great plot and characters

"The plot of this book is so great... the characters are so relatable! The writer has a great style and voice that I love, so even if this book didn’t have a plot, I would still love it! Maybe consider revising some of the chapters and grammar and add a few capital letters here and there and maybe add a few more spaces between long paragraphs, but overall a great book!"

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Loved it❤️❤️

"I literally loved this book and had a great experience reading it. Something about this book that I liked the most was it's unexpectedness which hooked to know what awaits the girl. I would love to look forward for more of your stories. But it would be better if you split your content in paragraphs in some of the chapters. Or else loved your book. Would highly recommend to anyone reading my review and would suggest them to read this book."

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Nice!

"I love the relationships between your characters, this is a great piece of work! Another wonderful work on Inkitt! Keep on writing <3"

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Amazing Story!

"The way that this story was written made it easy to read and easy to understand. The title has been chosen very well, as it fits the story and it's just overall an interesting and unique title to have. I firmly recommend this book and it deserves to have more readers and to be given much more attention. The only thing I would like to see would be for the chapters to be a slightly longer. Of course, I don't think there's anything wrong with the chapters' length, but I wish they would be at least a little bit longer. On the other hand, don't give up and continue the good work!"

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Lovely

"Your book is lovely read it all in 1 day "

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Amazingly written (even thought I didn't read)

"I love the way it is written and I love the setting which is in china, and I like the way you wrote some of it, and the title is just so fitting, I LAV this story gurl"

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A love which was never meant to be

"This story is soo sweet. I loved it, to be honest. "

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A Love Which Was Never Meant To Be

"I like the plot of this story, and the story itself, but the grammar sometimes makes it hard to understand. A way you could improve the story is to focus on grammar more, and maybe adding more details. I also like that you use a a variety of words and not use the same one again and again, like I've seen in some other stories. Overall, this is a great story and I'm looking forward to seeing more of your writing!"

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Good job!

"Great job! The chapters were short and easy to read, however some grammar attention needed. This is an easy fix tho! 👍🏻 The storyline can sometimes be a little confusing, but that is an easy fix too! (It's mostly because of the pharagraphs but I also saw that was a technical issue sooo it's not really a problem) Due to the short chapters I was able to binge-read the entire thing rather quickly and I realized that I quite enjoyed that 😍 Thank you for creating this book! ✨ "

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Wow!

"I like these types of books, where it feels like you are witnessing a person’s life through their adventures and craziness.... Each chapter is short which makes it special and more comfy to read and flip through the pages, if you are ever going to self publish this book, don’t forget to inform me coz I would love to buy it!❤️ Cheers to the writer and all the very best for your writing career!"

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Amazing.

"This is amazing. Just amazing! I've never read anything like it and its one of a kind! I love this story so much and I just couldn't stop reading it! The author is amazing at writing and this deserves so much love!!"

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A Love which was never meant to be pt. 1

"I like the storyline. This book has multitude characters which makes it intriguing. I highly recommend this novel to everyone :) good job author! The book just needs some editing of grammatical errors and punctuations then it'll be perfect!"

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A Love Which Was Never Meant To Be Pt.1

"I really like how you've immediately got me hooked with the first chapter itself 😄❤️ Even though the first chapter was quite short, I still enjoyed it ❣️ Never have I ever imagined that I would like a book's first chapter that was really short 📚💕 This book definitely has a great start but the grammar is just a little bit messy 😔😔 However, I would like to ask you to not be worried about that because if the story is awesome, the readers definitely won't bother about the small mistakes 🤗💕✨ Until then, byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 🦋❤️ -Kookie 🍪💕"

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A love that was never meant to be pt.1

"Very good, although the gramma could use some going over this book is still very good. I really like the author's writing style just because it is so descriptive. All together this story is very captivating and gets you hooked right from the start."

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