What is your opinion?
First Fae reading
"This story has a lot of potential! With only three chapter I'm sure it can be expanded into a whole world I would love to dive head first into!"
A very good start
"I came here with great expectations seeing how you like to be abruptly honest like you said and I can’t say I’m deceived. Your book is a really good one, with a really fluid narrative, good descriptions, great characters dynamic for starts and lots of potential overall. I have never seen such a concept before and at first I thought I was going to read a remake of an Harry Potter book but girl, you took your wand out of the sorting hat and made this story one full of possibilities. Good luck to you, the cover might need a change and there are few grammatical mistakes but other than that, you go and I’m really excited for you and for this new book that you are bringing out, hope you will stick to it and enjoy writing it from the first to the last line 💜"
Like it
"I like the story so far! Honestly, I'm not really into most fantasy very much, but I would definitely continue reading if there was more written. :) Keep up the good work!"
Amazing
"This here book is one of the best fantasy books I've ever read, it only has three chapters but it's already soo intruiging. I cannot wait for another update, will definitely recommend this 100%"
Book Review
"Very well done for the writer!! I was intrigued from the first chapter and pulled into the story. I love stories of witches and fantasy, so this is my cup of tea :)) Great job, can't wait to read more!!"
Nice Cover
"The cover is nice, with lovely shades of pink. I've only read the first chapter or so. I think it could be made a bit more captivating, drawing the reader in more, and help them get to know the main character a bit more. However, it is interesting, especially that weird noise she hears. I don't read this sort of fiction very much, so I'm not sure my review is the most accurate one."
Great so far.
"This is an excellent WIP, kudos to the author for creativity and the ability to immerse the reader. The only thing I would add would be a bit more detail on the first teacher. Also separating the thoughts from the other text could really highlight her thoughts. Otherwise, well written. Nice job author, keep up the good work! I look forward to reading more. "
Much to See
"The writer's voice was clear and strong; there were steady grammar/punctuation issues and yet not so overwhelming that they drew me out of the story. Full-frontal on a fifteen year-old character certainly did; this is a very bold and arguably story breaking choice, especially on the first page! There's also, of course, the immediate Harry Potter thought upon reading the summary; obviously the author is writing an original story but one wonders if it is original enough to keep readers' attention..."
Overall 2/5
"When I first started reading I wasn't hooked at all. I found this in my recommendations and decided to give it a try. I don't like it at all. This book is really boring and had me falling asleep. Your writing is great and grammar isn't bad. The plot wasn't interesting at all. This is my first review on Inkitt and I can't say that I'm impressed!"
