What is your opinion?
Emotional Fairy Tale
"Such a sad fairy tale. I felt sorry for Kun especially with how her parents treated her. Has an impactive family dynamic that ties in with Kun's anxiety. Great world building technique for a short story. I was not expecting the ending that there was."
perfect for fans of the grimm brothers.
"I love fairy tale style fantasy stories, and this is literally a fairy tale! The writing style reminds me a lot of old books of bedtime stories. The plot is very creative and in addition to fantasy this story still has romance and comedy in the right measure! The emotions you put into your story make everyone cry in the end! It's a great story for lovers of the Grimm brothers."
Heartbreaking but beautiful
"I almost teared up at the ending of this. I could feel her heartbreak, all the details and the vivid world completely immersed me in the story. I can’t think of enough good things to say about this. The world-building was incredibly strong, so much detail was packed in but it never felt overwhelming. Overall I’m thoroughly impressed. Fantastic job! :)"
Wow!
"How you can fit such a deep, emotional story into three short chapters I don't know, but it was bloody fantastic! You could feel the pixies heartbreak through the story, and you really feel for her. I really thought she was going to get Cain at the end! Keep up the amazing work! Sofia"
Beautiful
"This story is beautiful so far. I added the book; the dialogue was excellent; the interaction with the characters was very well done. I want to read more of your book. I usually can't hold interest in books. I am very interested in this book. "
